2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by PhoenixTailAndHolly Chapter 1

20th October 2010:
Hi!

I liked the story, but the ending felt a bit forced. The diary really doesn't serve any purpose: he could have been flipping through some old photographs and remembered the same things.

Still, rated it a 6/10, for an entertaining read.

Author's Response: Ya... I really wasn't into it at the end, and I really have no idea why I posted it. I may go back one day and fix it up. Thanks!

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Review #2, by Marybeth Chapter 1

2nd October 2010:
A cute story - I really enjoyed it!

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