Hi! I liked the story, but the ending felt a bit forced. The diary really doesn't serve any purpose: he could have been flipping through some old photographs and remembered the same things. Still, rated it a 6/10, for an entertaining read.Author's Response: Ya... I really wasn't into it at the end, and I really have no idea why I posted it. I may go back one day and fix it up. Thanks! Report Review
A cute story - I really enjoyed it! Report Review
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