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Review #1, by kenpo Island

15th April 2014:
Hello!

This was really interesting. I think that it's cool that you chose Angelina for the POV, and went back to describe the moments when she realised that Fred had died. Imaging what it was like for anyone in that Great Hall... just looking around and seeing everyone that had died... it would be so heartbreaking.
My favorite line was:
Possibly much worse was seeing George, unable to control himself, kneeling beside his twinís corpse in a tragic parody of prayer.

I like that Angelina still really cared about him, and she finally went to see him.

Also, I really want to try that icecream.

Really nice story, you did a great job with it.

-Huffleclaw/Ravenpuff Eggstravaganza-

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Review #2, by SilentConfession Island

18th February 2011:
Hi! i think you captured a lot of real, raw emotion in this story. I could feel George's anguish and the line "how does one go about regular business when half of him is gone..." it nearly made me weep with sadness. That is exactly what i've been thinking about with George, how does he survive when the person who he bounced off of, the person who understood him, the person who made him who he was is now gone? I still actively mourn Fred's death it makes me so sad.
I like how you tried tackling how Angelina and George started getting together, i can definitely see how awkward it would be to try and comfort that sort of pain and i think you captured that whole 'i have NO idea what i can do for you to make you feel better'.

The only thing i see is the last bit where they kiss... i don't know, it just didn't seem to fit well with the rest and i doubt that George would even be thinking about being romantic with anyone just yet. It jolted me, i think it would have worked better if they just held hands or something. But it was still a sad, bittersweet story. Good job. 8/10

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Review #3, by hp_gwrocks Island

29th September 2010:
i love it. i wish there for more george and anglinace stories. :)

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