Keylime, Next time, give me the chapter to edit BEFORE you post! I'm sick of editing, like, three times >:( ~Mitchy Report Review
This is good so far. I'd like to say a couple things. One, in the summary you talk about romance and since Draco is the main character I would expect it would be about him, however in the pairings there is no mention of Draco. Also, Draco's middle name is Abraxas, not Lucius. Overall, it was a good chapter, I hope you update soon, I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this. :) Report Review
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