Poignant and well written. At least it wasn't a unicorn.Author's Response: Thank you :) True, a unicorn would have been endless sad. Report Review
Great story/one-shot. I enjoyed it so much. Report Review
I like this. It's well written, engaging, and the characterization is done beautifully. There are no areas I see of that need improving, except to maybe add in a date or something from the time when it goes back and forth from present day to the past, just to help keep those seperate. I find the story very interesting and think that you have done an excellent job.Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback :) That was really quick! I hadn't thought about putting dates in, but it's a good idea to make the seperation more obvious.
I'm glad you liked it :) Report Review
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