Oh..how I love passing notes in class and then the teacher reads it and the boy in the note is also in the class and I go all red, Oh the joy! Very good indeed can't wait for more.

one question: Elenor is not Lucille's friend right? b/c in the first chapter it said she teased her then it said they were best friends.so i was confused

-Katt

Author's Response: Haha! I'm planning on finishing it next year.

Eleanor used to be best friends with Lucille but she picked on her.

x Ely

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Aw...Lucille is so clumsy and awkward! I love her! I am looking forward to reading more, it sounds interesting! I have never read Prom Date but if someone dies then I will probably love it lol

-Kattia

Author's Response: Haha! Thank you! Neither have I but I've got to agree with you there.

x Ely

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Hey, it's me from the forums! Sorry for the long wait, but here goes!

I like your writing style, and have almost criticism! Just a few things...

"She was incredibly thin, mainly because she loved going for long walks outside, Her skin was pale with a few freckles." You may want to either change the comma to a period, or uncapitalize Her. Just a small grammar thing, not a big deal.

Also, I felt your description of Lucille was a little choppy. I understand the short, staccato sentences thing, but maybe make all of them that way or none at all? Sorry, I'm nitpicky :P

Overall though, very nice! And I like that they met Tom...very interesting!

Author's Response: It's alright!

Thank you very much for your lovely review I will defintely fix those things up.

x Ely

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aw! PLEASE WRITE MORE! I'm hoked, lol. xoxo

Author's Response: Aww thank you! I'll try for sure.

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*tackle hug* This was great, Ely!

It's cute and fluffy, which is good because once it gets more mystery, it's going to become such a great story!!!

I like how you've developed the characters so far, and I can't wait to see where you will go with them, especially Lucille.

And Tom!!! *dreamy sigh* I am very much looking forward to reading more of him ;)

Fantastic work, Ely! And yes, you were pretty insane to sign up for so many challenges :P

Good luck for this one!!!

♥ Plague Rat Lizzie xx

Author's Response: *is tackle hugged* Lizzie!

Thank you, Thank you, Thank you! I have very much in store for Lucille and Tom, You shall enjoy it, I hope.

Thanks again Lizzie! Loff you.

x Ely

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Oh, I just love beginnings of novellas! It's always interesting to see the scene set, and you did a great job!

I really liked how you described the characters, and their social standing. It was a great insight as to exactly who they were. And, of course, enter: mysterious, hot boy *dreamy sigh* hehe, I love Tom Riddle :P

I think you have started brilliantly, and I can't wait to see where this goes! Let me know when you update, okay? Or I could just lurk your author's page...

Loff you, Ely Belly!

~Lizzie xx

Oh, and Let The Record Show that I loved this chapter! :D

Author's Response: Aww, Thanks Lizzie!

Me too *sighs and stares off into the distance*

The next chapter is in the queue as we speak but I'll send you a comment when it's done.

Loff you more.
x Ely

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I'm not sure if i like it jet but i was well written as far as i could tell.
But, sorry, that was the crappiest summoning (

Author's Response: It's only the prologue really so the interesting stuff starts to happen in the next chapter. Yeah, I know but I couldn't come up with anything.

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