Your story is quite good and the direction it's going is quite interesting but the grammar and spelling is pretty bad... So it's kind of confusing to read, if you fixed that all up then I think your story would have alot of potential :) Report Review
It sounds very interesting, and I want to read more. I wanna know what Bella did! Grammar, punctuation still needs work lol!Author's Response: thanks and I'll update soon i just need 2 put the other chapter of my other story first i got chapter 2 written all ready :P :P Report Review
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