Beautifully written. I loved the descriptions of how they were lying, haha! So fuzzy and fluffy and just the right length.
" "I loved it, Harry. I don't think I've ever seen anything so beautiful."
It was doubtful that she heard his whispered I have, as she continued. "
How sweet is that?!
Seriously, amazing stuff, put a smile on my face. :) Report Review
Its such a heartwarming story. Simple and sweet yet so powerful in its impact. Report Review
Wow! This was so unbelievably gorgeous! So beautiful, really an amazing piece of writing! I absolutely loved this! Your writing was really good in this. So descriptive, and you really got the atmosphere of the whole story matching up with Harry/Ginny's slow yet beautiful romance. The way you wrote this was just brilliant. I loved this line, "her voice wasn't so much an interruption as a natural progression from the birdsong." Just such a beautiful thought.
I loved how they lay in the paddock in different positions. This made me laugh: "He didn't have to strain to see her feet, or her knees, or. . . what were those?" aha! I also loved the birthdays. I loved the 'second present, but didn't want to give it in front of the family'. It was so incredibly sweet when Ginny kissed Harry, and I almost melted inside when Harry kissed Ginny! So sweet! Just a really, really lovely and sweet romantic story! Brilliant writing!
- maskedmuggle, Ravenclaw :) Report Review
This was beautiful. The description in this was gorgeous and I could imagine actually being there, which was really nice. I loved how Harry and Ginny were towards eachother, I think it was really natural and nice. I loved how they could open up to eachother. There were also some really nice touches in this- the thing about Fred and George scaring her when she was younger and the roses in particular were adorable. And the kiss was absoloutely beautiful. The way that you write them is really sweet, but still in character, so well done! (:
Leanne (leannemariesnape, Hufflepuff) Report Review
A! why do i love this story so much?Author's Response: Well, it could be because I'm an absolutely awesome author. But more likely, it just resonates with you for some reason, and that resonance comes out in spite of my meager authorial talents.
Thanks! Report Review
I don't understand why this story doesn't have more reviews?! This is absolutly amazing! It's so beautiful! And so perfectly written, I can't pick out a single fault! You have such a way with words, the whole story just fit. It's so brilliant. Well done!Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I really liked this one, and I'm glad there's at least one other person out there who likes it too. Report Review
This is BEAUTIFUL. Sweet and heartfelt and totally romantic. I really loved reading it. I have the warm & fuzzies right now. Great writing, the descriptions are amazing, good job on characterization, dialogue feels natural, this is just a really, really excellent story. Love it!Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your review! Report Review
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