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Review #1, by Dumbledores favourite the otherside

1st September 2011:
a good, interesting series but it made me cry at times!
i know in the prologue you suggest tonks is the mother, but please have ginny carry the baby; it just wouldn't seem right for anyone else:(
more please:)

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Review #2, by Ilisten2potterwatch Beginning a new reality

24th April 2011:
You're torturing me! I can't wait to find out who's actually carrying Harrys child. Please update soon!!! =)

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Review #3, by Purple_Ink Prologue - An introduction

4th April 2011:
Dude, check your verb tenses and punctuation. I cannot stand reading past the intro. The idea is great, and the intro is intriguing, but fix your gosh darn errors!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review as you have pointed out grammar and tenses are not my strong point! I do use a spelling and grammar check and read though a number of times but clearly not enough.

I'll try going over it again but given I haven't picked up the problems previously I doubt there will much difference.

The problem is *hopefully* less pronounced in later chapters as they are predominately set in the present.


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Review #4, by steve-o The request

18th October 2010:
this is an interesting idea, id like to see where your going with it. so keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thanks for the review I wasn't expecting any.

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