OMG wow. You are a fantastic writer, this is how I imagined the "Lily and James" story beginning. I would have reviewed the other chapters as well but I got caught up in reading them. I love your perspective and I think you have a very talented easy read style. Please update soon, can't wait to see more!

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Where have you been???
I sure hope you haven't abandoned this story=(
I absolutely love it and all of your fans and myself included would be sooo sad if you never finish.
We looove you!!!
Here's to hoping to read the next chapter soon!!
Cheers!

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GAH I LOVE THIS FANFIC SO PLEASE FINISH IT PRONTO

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please update soon! your story is fantastic :)

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:( I tried finding your tumblr and meet the author page but its all gone and you haven't updated a story in forever :(! pLease don't abandon your stories you are way too talented and have way too many ardent followers for you to just give up on us all :(

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Thank you so much for writing this, I really just love it :) more chapters would be nice...you know, just saying. apparently reviews=happiness and happiness=updates if I remember correctly, so here's my contribution. I simply request that you continue being awesome

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Please!! Hurry up and write more, I'm actually obsessed with this story.. Don't make me wait !! Thats just plain evil.

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Please please write more I love your story !

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i like this, though i wish it was from adaras point of view. :) but i do love lily(not that way, I AM FEMALE!!) toots-

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I can't wait for you to update and see how James and Lily progress. I wonder if James is more cut up about Elisabeth or if he really is over her and how he will react when he next sees her? He really should have broken up with her a lot earlier, and I hope for her sake that she can move on relatively quickly. I am glad James and Lily are so happy right now and hope things continue that way. And I hope Sirius and Adara talk soon.

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this is amazing! i cant wait to continue reading it! you've all the charicters bang on! maybe something happens between elizibeth and lily? remus gets a girl? loveing it! keep up the good work! xx

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Ah omg i cannot wait for the next chapter! i actually love this story so much im like constantly smiling when i read it! update sooon please !
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update it
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pls pl spl spl spslpsfnighjsgdsgjsgd

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I loved this chapter!!
I still can't see how you can break Sirius and Adara up but I really hope they get back get back together soon.
Don't worry about updating times, you're still updating and you're an amazing writer so that's all that matters.
I can't wait to see what's going to happen next, please update as soon as you can.

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Omigod James just break up with Elizabeth! good Lord! you. love. Lily. end of story. break up with Elizabeth because its the right thing to do! I'm so excited to read more and see what happens! and how is Elizabeth not super mad and broken up with James because he cheated on her...? where is the irrational 15 year old inside that girl?! JILY SHIPPERS FO LYFE

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Xoxoxo hope u update soon. Awesome job as always

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Another great chapter! I love this story!!! 10/10 :D

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2nd time ive read to this point in your storyand I am so so so very extremely happy there is more. :)

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Superb, as per usual :)
And I hope you rid yourself of that writer's block. I know how annoying it is to press 'backspace' more often than any of the letters on your keyboard.

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

*Maria

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write faster! i'm dying over here

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Hello! IT'S BEEN TOO LONG!!

But I agree with Lily and James, Adara and Sirius are being stupid! STOO-PID! What a silly reason to break up! He should have waited to ask and she could have just said no! Crazies!

Great job, as usual!

KEEP WRITING :D
Shay_Gryff

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I love this story, and I'm excited to see where it will go from here!

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YAAY! Update! :))
I'd nearly given up hope! ;)

But it's a great chapter, I just love your marauder stories. You're so great at describing the whole lily/james relationship, it's definitely one of my favourite stories!

Keep updating!

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AN UPDATE! YAY! That was a really good chapter, can't wait for the next.
9/10 :)

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I'm so happy that you updated. It's nice to see Lily and James behaving as a normal couple. But I am looking forward to them being able to have much needed discussions about everything that has happened between them as they kept getting interrupted during the break and they obviously still have stuff to work out. I hope at some point Lily confronts James about his double standard. It's okay for him to have dated, shagged, and been in love with Elisabeth, yet he can't deal with the fact that Lily has ever had any feelings for anyone else or done anything physical with them-like Severus, Remus or Amos. And it really bugged me when he was fine with it being Elisabeth and him with Lily as his friend but alone. I know it shouldn't matter as they are together now, but his hypocritical and selfish attitude throughout the story has really bugged me. And he did move onto Lily a little fast after being in such a serous relationship and I hope he won't get jealous of Elisabeth being with something else or have anything happen with her as I'm sure Lily is still feeling insecure about is feelings for both girls. But I'm excited to see what happens.

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