I thought this was awesome! It was interesting but in a good way. I really like how you had portrayed Bellatrix. It's nice to see the slightly softer side of her character. I also liked your descriptions, however gross and disturbing they were. "Smoking Pieces" *Shudders* Overall great job though. :DAuthor's Response: I'm glad you found it interesting. As you know, I'm obsessed and intrigued by Bellatrix. So of course, I needed to play with her character and see what I could do.
This is one of my two m-rated fics. And both are because of descriptions that are gross and disturbing.
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I liked how Bellatrix seemed human for once. Very good job, and I thought it would be cool if you wrote a sequel!
And just to let you know, lots of people like this fanfiction, other authors suggested I read it, and I wasn't disappointed!
Great job!Author's Response: Thanks for another review my number one reviewer! I'm not sure about a sequel though. I have no idea what it would be about...
Whoah that's awesome!
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