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Review #1, by Kayla Lay kari and horace and kari fun day

19th September 2010:
I'm not exactly sure what was going on in this story. There were many many gramatical errors and a lot of run on sentences. You need to go through and capitalize your proper nouns and the beginnings of senstences. Your punctuation needs a bit of work. All together I would go into microsoft word and rewrite it there where it can show you gramatical errors. I'm really not sure how this got past the moderators. It really needs some work. I don't mean to be mean. I'm just trying to help you improve your writing skills.

-Kayla

Author's Response: pm on the forums with the correction it ok

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