My creys... Brilliant.
Powerful ending. Report Review
This is one of the best one-shots I have ever read.
I love it. Could you make a Sirius/OC novel. I would
definitely read it.
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Oh my god! This is amazing. No exaduration Whatsoever, this is the best one shot I've ever read. Report Review
Definately one of the best one-shots I've read.
I hope you consider making one of Sirius/OC novella's.
I would gladly read it.
This is amazing.Well done. Report Review
Read this story a long time ago. Then read it again not too long ago. And have always loved it :)
I think it made me cry, it was beautiful :)
xxx sofia. Report Review
Ughhh i hate you. Why did i read this i cant stop crying D:
Other than that youre an amazing writer, truely. Report Review
This was absolutely amazing.
It had a LOT of depth to it, a lot more than a one-shot can usually get across.
You NAILED it.
This was so deep, so ...heart wrenching.
I felt as if I knew each of the characters you were fleshing out in the letter, as if I knew them perfectly, even though they were only mentioned.
Her pain, her love, her admission of the fact that she missed James and Lily, that she loved Sirius, all of it...it cut at me.
That was amazing. I really don't know what to say. There really is nothing I could say that would tell you how amazing and wonderful and brilliant and PERFECTLY WRITTEN this was. Report Review
This is brilliant, you've probably had a lot of reviews saying 'base a story on this' right? Well, I think that this is enough. I think it doesn't show to much of their relationship so that the reader can fill in the parts you left out, which I always like to do :') a bit of a mystery is good.
You wrote the letter so beautifully, and you can really connect to Jane because you can really tell she's putting everything into writing this letter to Sirius, but my favourite line has got to be the letter from Sirius - even though its only five words; Its so powerful.
Well done :)
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OMG that was amzing! you are such a talented writer! it's so moving! Report Review
I just had to say that it was absolutelly brilliant, enough said.
You describe her feelings so deep it made me cry Report Review
I love it! I absolutely love it! I know its a one-shot but now I want to hear the rest of the story! Report Review
I totally love this!!! That would be so amazing if you wrote a fic based on this. Like a story of their Hogwarts years. I love Sirius/OC fics. Great job! :) Report Review
This was so sad, it really made me cry. It's so hearfelt and real, and it's completely true how love hurts. I love this story. Report Review
oh my goodness that made me cry a lot. it was beautiful/ Report Review
Oh my god! this is wonderful! So emotional! you should write and entre story based off of this :) Report Review
oh. my. god. thats so good. i love it. its so sweet! its like a fresh new perspective of sirius. (im quite a sirius fangirl) :)
I also love the fact that its from the harry era. :) Report Review
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