Hey! Lee from TGS here following you in the tag thread. And I have to say that this was really cute. The way he just gaped at her was priceless and I could see it perfectly in my head. This one is going on my favs list. ;)Author's Response: Hello! Thank you for stopping by(: I'm glad you liked it, it was a lot of fun to write! Hehe. Report Review
That was really cute. Although I felt quite sad for him at first (I mean, something sad must be going on for him to turn that way...) but I actually chuckled through the ending.
Well written, just long enough for the reader to get a good glimpse into Al's personality and not too long for him to embarass himself!
I really enjoyed it, great work!
AkussaAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you laughed in it(: I suppose that's really the point with a story like this! Thank you for stopping by and reviewing; I really appreciate it! Report Review
Hahaha, this was too cute. I loved the line "Wanna get married and bear my children?" I LOL'd
This was really funny, well written, and had a very unique take on the life of our dear Albus potter (: I very much enjoyed!
10/10Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it(: It was a blast to write, I had a lot of fun. Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
I am here to review you since you were above me! That was cute =)
Oh...a drunk Albus Potter how grand haha. I loved the pick up line it made me chuckle
KattiaAuthor's Response: Thanks for stopping by! I'm glad you liked it. It was fun to write(: Report Review
Ohhh, this looked interesting and it was. Plus, it had colin morgan on the banner and nom nom nom. I loved it! Pure amazingnes! It makes me laugh that Albus has been married twice. I loved the pick up lines, this story made me laugh through it. Albus is such a flirt ;)
xxxAuthor's Response: It took my ages to choose a person who was goofy and cute enough to be on the banner :P I'm glad you liked it, Keely! I do try and please, haha. Report Review
Too cute! But poor Al, he seems like a sad sad boy... I believed it, which is what makes me decide if I like something or not. So far, everything I've read of yours is fantastic.
Merry Gryffie Christmas!Author's Response: I liked writing this. It was quite a different premise than I'm used to, so it was fun. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
Ha-Ha, I very thoroughly enjoyed this piece, it made me laugh :)Author's Response: Glad you liked it! And thank you for reviewing(: Report Review
It was brilliant and may I say funny. I can just see the scene playing in my mind, though I wish this piece would've been longer.Author's Response: I did want to add more at the end, but I just couldn't make it work so I had to find a stopping point. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for reviewing! Report Review
Haha, enjoyed it alot :)
I loved the pick up line! It took me a few seconds to get it, but once i did, it was funny!
I especially loved the different character you gave Albus here! Normally he's the cliche popular guy, so especially at the beginning, you gave me a different, original character, and i liked it!
Whooo awesome fic :)Author's Response: Hehe, I'm pleased you liked it! I did enjoy taking a bit of a different take on Albus, so I'm happy you noticed. Thanks for reviewing, you're the besttt. Report Review
Haha. I loved it! I actually giggled a bit, which is a rarity.
I thought the working in of the pickup line was fantastic, and I feel like if you wanted you could follow this up with a short story or something.
Kristen=]Author's Response: Ooh! I made you laugh. Win. Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
heheheh this was cute. I liked it very much. And the pickup line was perfectly cheesy and I loved it. Good job :D
~alexAuthor's Response: Teehee, thank you(: I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
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