Reading Reviews for Remus' Secret
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Review #1, by Jdiddy3 Not so Insensitive?

23rd January 2018:
I love this story. Is there a sequel in the works?

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Review #2, by anon Competition Not Accounted For

27th December 2015:
"I dont feel like hearing my mom and dad argue, so no my house. I said" im confused. isnt her dad dead?

Author's Response: Probably, but I changed my mind so many times on that, that parts of the story contradict on another. I am going to edit, but its on hold for now so I can focus on college. I'm editing this summer.

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Review #3, by anon Caught By The Hufflepuffs

27th December 2015:

Author's Response: Yeah, she was based off someone I was annoyed with at the time.

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Review #4, by anon Quidditch Games and Hogsmeade trips

26th December 2015:
but like why couldnt pomfrey just heal her leg. theyre fvcking wizards

Author's Response: because than I would have had to change what I wanted to do with the story.

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Review #5, by Storm Not so Insensitive?

4th September 2015:
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this fan fiction. Largely I am impressed with how you kept it mostly canonical. It is still a little rough on the edges but the roughness does not take away from the story. I understand this was finished a long time ago, but if you are still looking for a beta then I would be more than happy to offer my services.

Author's Response: yeah i first wrote it in sixth grade, and since than I forgot my original goal of the story, and I havent gotten past chapter two in editing. I really need someone to bounce idea off of

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Review #6, by Marauders Luck They Know That We Know

2nd June 2015:
Yeah! I'm so glad! Sorry I'm posting on this chapter, they wouldn't allow me to answer back! You really are an amazing writer, and I'd love to beta for you! Please (um... dm, or how does that work?) Because I'd be extremely happy and hopefully, well talk soon

Author's Response: I do not think there is a way to dm on this site, but you can pm from their banner art site the-dark-arts my username is the same as on here

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Review #7, by Marauders Luck Not so Insensitive?

19th May 2015:
Okay, so this story is the most amazing story ever and I don't understand how you could improve on it. (Besides actually letting them make up!) But if your still looking for a beta, I volunteer as tribute! Lol, sorry. Please reply because this story is one of the best I've ever read, and I'd literally do a mental happy dance if you do!

Author's Response: oh my gosh yes please! That would be so great, I'm so glad you like my story:)

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Review #8, by gigi Hufflepuff Rematch!

26th February 2015:
The Map is magic, that's cheating.

Author's Response: The marauders have no rules;) and that was kind of the point I was going for

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Review #9, by padmoonyfoot7 Not so Insensitive?

17th June 2012:
OMM, it's finished! I'm slightly sad, though I thinkthat you concluded it greatly. I would really love to read the sequel.
Keep up the good work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

Author's Response: Thank you :D I'm posting the sequel soon, hopefully

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Review #10, by padmoonyfoot7 They Know That We Know

1st June 2012:
Yay, Charlotte and Sirius!
Wow well I'm looking for ward to the last chapter and the sequel! Can't wait to read more!
You did a really good job with this story, having most of it written out in advance - you should be proud!
So excited to read more,
Keep up the good work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much :D I'm kinda sad that I'm finished

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Review #11, by padmoonyfoot7 Charlotte

27th May 2012:
It's a really good chapter!!
Will Sirius not be peed about what she did to Remus? Aaah well, only time will tell.
Keep up the good work!! (and update sooon!)

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

Author's Response: Remus doesn't really tell the marauders what happened. He thought he deserved and he knew his friend would freak out on them.hope you didn't wanna see Sirius freak out that much!

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Review #12, by padmoonyfoot7 Going Crazy

27th April 2012:
Great chapter, I really wanted to know what the fudge was going on in Remus' head, but now I get that he was feeling the same as Liz I guess. I don't know if they'll end up together, but it doesn't seem likeit at the moment.
I think you did a great job at showing how she felt because she's angry and feeling guilty at the same time and she's sorta blaming herself and then him. I know it sounds evil but it's slightly just a teensy bit funny - in a way.
Can't wait for the next chapter,
Keep up the good work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

Author's Response: Thanks :D I'm never sure how to write about emotions. This is one of my favorite chapters

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Review #13, by padmoonyfoot7 Pretending

15th April 2012:
Good, though I feel very bad for Liz. I think that Remus has his reasons and that he actually is affected by the break-up, though maybe he's choosing to deal with it in a different way.
Keep up the good work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

Author's Response: Remus does have his reasons, hes just better at hiding his. Thank you so much for reviewing :D

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Review #14, by padmoonyfoot7 Break-ups

2nd April 2012:
very well done!! i was wondering why she was so afraid of werewolves, but now it makes sense. and i think you did the wright thing with the surprise!
Keep up the good work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I wasn't sure if it was too random. They'll be more about here friend in the sequel

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Review #15, by padmoonyfoot7 Tempers

25th March 2012:
Really love your story! I'd really love to read more!
Please update soon!!
Keep up the good work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

Author's Response: Thank :D I'll update as fast as I can

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Review #16, by padmoonyfoot7 How Awkward...

15th March 2012:
I'd love a sequel!!
Keep up the good work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

Author's Response: I'm writing the sequel now :D thanks for the review!!

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Review #17, by padmoonyfoot7 Quidditch Games and Hogsmeade trips

13th March 2012:
I like the piggyback ride with Remus, though I think the girls are very nosy, I can't blame them for wanting to know!!
Great story!!
Keep up the good work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

Author's Response: The piggyback ride withe Remus was my favorite part

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Review #18, by moonysmonthlyproblem Mudblood-calling-jerks

25th February 2012:
Really great portrayal of Sev and Lily's argument! :D Great chapter agian!

Author's Response: thanks! theres only so many ways to write Lily and sevs argument, you know?

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Review #19, by moonysmonthlyproblem A Little Break is a Good Thing

17th December 2011:
Yay the 'L' bomb!! :D I was waiting for it to happen :3
another great chapter, keep them coming ;D

Author's Response: I'll try! After the staffs break though, I think I'll start going back and editing some of my past chapters. Not to mentions add some more chapter to my other stories ;D

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Review #20, by Lexi Sweet Revenge

9th December 2011:
Wow, this chapters gr8!!! (well all the other chapters r too, i just haven't been on 4 a while :L) ANYWAYYY,the stuf about them getting revenge etc is really cool;) but i cant exactly imagine maya dying :L maybe she cld go 2 a different school or something? i'm not saying u have 2 use tht idea lol, its ur story!!! :) i dont know if any of that made sense, but oh well:)

Author's Response: Thank you ever so much for the review! :D I apperciate it! and I'm glad you like my story, and I've decided not to kill Maya, cuz she's going to be back in the sequel...

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Review #21, by Harry_Potter777 Sweet Revenge

26th November 2011:
Hey:) I like this story, not only because I'm really into the marauders but because I LOVE all your evil revenge stuff:D
~happy writing!!

Author's Response: ahaha, thank you so much for the review!
My friends help me come up with most of the revenge plots! They have a bunch of good ideas!

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Review #22, by DADA Secret of Our Own

26th November 2011:
where is the sequel?!?!?!

Author's Response: I haven't really started it yet.I'm going to post the rest of the chapters up for Remus' Secret, and once I get to the fifth chapter in the sequel I'll start posting that one up as well. The name of the sequel will most likely be "Was It Worth It?" But I haven't completly decided on it

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Review #23, by DADA How Awkward...

26th November 2011:
yes U should continue writting

Author's Response: I have all the chapter written, but I'm being a little slow on the updating. Theres about 14 chapters left to be posted, and I'll try to update more often. I'm starting to feel bad that I haven't in a while, but I just posted chapter 26 and I'll post 27 soon

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Review #24, by HermioneGranger98 Full Moons and a Vicious Tree

3rd September 2011:
Love it ;) Can't wait to read the next chapter! :D

Author's Response: i appreciate the review. and sorry if i spelled that wrong. I'll update as soon as I can

thank you so much fo the review :)

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Review #25, by moonysmonthlyproblem Full Moons and a Vicious Tree

30th August 2011:
This was good! Update as soon as possible! :D

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! And I'll update when I can

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