AW, poor pansy. It is not easy to sympathize with her so when i read a story that gets me to give her sympathy, i just have to praise it! :) This was down right amaizing, i love the Pansy/Blaise ship way more the Draco/Pansy so you might understand why i love your ending so much!
Your characterization was great, with Draco, and Blaise and Pansy the only thing i thought to be kinda off was Pansy wanting to fighti couldnt see her very much wanting to stay around for a battle no matter what side she was on. I simply loved your details and word choice though, especially the beggining when it talks about her tears mixing with the raindrops on the window, this was GREAT imagery and i did love it. All in all a great story.

Author's Response: When I first read DH, I was relieved Pansy didn't up with Draco but now I sort of feel bad for her- We don't really know much about her and therefore we don't know her true personality.

I don't think Draco would care about her at all and therefore I wanted to give her a bit of a happy ending.

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Aw.

I really liked it. I always liked the thought of Pansy and Blaise together lol! But I liked that it was serious as well, not just a little love story. It was sad :(

Perhaps a bit rushed, but other than that it was good!

Author's Response: I think they'd be super cute together! Thank you for your lovely review :)

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I really enjoyed it! Dumb Draco breaking Pansy's heart after seven years without an explaination. Blaise is so caring, I would have thought he would be cold and narcisstic but maybe he has always loved Pansy!

10/10
Kattia

Author's Response: For a while I had this odd obsession with write Pansy and this is where that came out of :/

Thank you so much!

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Sad and very sweet. I actually felt bad for Pansy, for the first time ever!
Great story!

Author's Response: Thank you! That was my plan.

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First I would Like to thank you for entering the challenge :)

I have to say, I was very excited when I read the summery. I was excited to see Pansy's view f everything and such.

The storyline was lovely! You brought out Pansy's struggle very well.

But, I was a bit confused when she kissed him, seeing as previous to the event; she didn't bring up that she had feelings for him.The whole thing seemed a tad bit rushed also, but I wish it had been longer, I would have enjoyed reading into it a more :)

Thank you for entering :)

Author's Response: Thank you for issuing the challenge in the first place!

Haha, I love writing Pansy at the moment. I'm sure why she's just great to write.

You do have a point there, maybe at a later date I'll edit it a bit.

Thank you for creating your wonderful challenge!

x Ely

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