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Review #1, by sharpasDOH

24th September 2010:

Why are their large gaps between each sentence it makes it a pain to read.

Author's Response: hi, There are large gaps because I have uploaded the story from word processor, the site automatically aranges the story that way, when I get chance I will sort it out.

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Review #2, by Aurorofthelight

chapter 2

24th September 2010:

Great concept for your story! This definitely one that hooks the reader right from the start! Just take your time & watch your spelling(ie: it's wotcher not watcher)! Will be watching this one with interest! Good luck!

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Review #3, by PhoenixSeeker

Chapter 1

29th August 2010:

Please please please continue !!! Love it

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Review #4, by chloe

Chapter 1

27th August 2010:

that was great :) i lovee tonks and lupin + uncle vernon makes me chuckle :L xx

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Review #5, by micking

Chapter 1

27th August 2010:

So glad that Harry, Ron and Hermoine get to work together. Don't know how they will get thru Professor Snape's class. Really looking forward to all of this. Oh, found this story while cruising the website. Hope you have a grand time progressing this story. It has a lot of potential. Good Luck. Will stop by later and see what you have created here.

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