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Review #1, by Jazzeh Turnip the fires we feel

22nd August 2010:
This is so poetic and beautiful. It's only on the rare occasion that something that's not particularly sad makes me cry, and that it's the fault of the writing itself not the plot.

I never thought before that Rowena would've been alive when the Grey Lady (did she have a name in canon?) was killed. It's very tragic though, if she was. No parent wants to outlive their children.

The old style (I'm articulate at 3am, I know) you've written in is so magnificent. That ending sentence would've been less effective with out it and it just compliments the whole theme of the piece and the characters. If it was written "normally" then I'm not sure I would be effected quite in the way I am now.

Well done on writing such a stunning piece. I've read a LOT of the entries for the every word counts challenge, and this is up there with the best of 'em.

10/10
Lorren

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Review #2, by FannyPrice the fires we feel

21st August 2010:
Hello!

I really enjoyed this Kali, and really short, but excellent and beautiful described Founders. I enjoyed the language, and the details that firmly placed it in the time period--the furs, the hunt, the horses, etc.

So lovely! A really great take on Rowena's pov of her daughter leaving!

Great job!

Miranda

Author's Response: Hey Miranda! Thank you so much for reviewing! :) I'll get to reading and reviewing Rat.Wolf.Dog asap.

I'm so glad you liked the language! I had to keep the story short for the challenge, so I tried to use visualization more than anything else, to make it short but (hopefully) vivid.

Thank you so much! *hugs* I'm so glad you liked it.

XOXO, Kalina


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