This was actually quite a cool one-shot. I think it shows her paranoia and fear over what could happen to her family. After all, don't dreams reveal to us our deepest fears? The dialogue was really nicely done, and flowed very well. I was surprised by the ending, but it was a good little twist when she realises it was a dream. This was a very interesting little insight into the main character's mind. Well done! ^_^ Leanne (leannemariesnape, Hufflepuff)Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I never really liked this one as much, so I'm happy for the positive feedback, and I''m really glad you enjoyed the story. :D Report Review
This is really good. Nice job :) Report Review
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