I also wanted to say that your grammar and writing style have improved so much! I love your stories! :DAuthor's Response: Really? :D I was hoping that it would, I've slaved over grammar books and things like that XD Of course, the grammar doesn't quite apply anywhere else BUT my stories :P haha Thanks for reviewing again, I can't wait to see the next one ;D (I'm going to be updating my Harry and Ginny story soon, I'm almost done rewriting the 2nd chapter and I'll start the 27th now ;D) Again, thanks for reviewing! Report Review
First, let me just apologize for not reading and reviewing lately. I am so sorry! :( I've been so busy with school and everything. I just hadn't had time to go on HPFF. But, I'm back now. :) I absolutely loved this chapter. I thought the moment between Ginny and Hermione was really sweet. It was also really sad because you never see Ginny break down like that. I think this chapter was very sad because it brought the flashbacks of the pain, bloodshed and ultimate loss that everyone has faced. I love how you make the love stories between Herry and Ginny and Ron and Hermione flow together so beautifully. :D I love reading your work. You keep writing, and I'll keep reviewing. It may not always be right away, but I will review your stories. :) Great job. Keep up the good work. Till next time, potterfreak2Author's Response: It's okay! It is nice to hear from you again though! :D I'll keep writing, you keep reviewing? :) Seems like a good deal for me ;D Until next time :) ~HarryandGinnyForEver Report Review
Hey I read your other stories on the week end and I think your the best author that I've read so far ^_^ and did I mention I love them!!? Well I do, and this one in particular is AMAZING!!:)Author's Response: Really:O Thank you so much!:D The next chapter is in the queue, should be out in a day or two^_^ HarryandGinnyForEver Report Review
I love this side of Ron that you've developed. He's so sweet. I'm glad you've decided to make this a novella :)Author's Response: I'm being so indecisive about this story. I want to be able to control which story I write and not take a long time doing so. It's a short story now, and was just going to be when they're at Hogwarts after the war...does that make sense? Thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate it!:D HarryandGinnyForEver Report Review
I really, really like this! I love how you've captured Ron and Hermione's characteristics so well. Their relationship is very believable. I look forward to reading more!Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!:D HarryandGinnyForEver Report Review
This chapter was so cute!! I really liked it - Ron hearing Hermione's screams as his boggart was super adorable. What are the rest of Ron's secrets? :P Hope to check out your other story as well, it sounds really interesting :)Author's Response: Still thinking about a few more Ron secrets...but we have to wait, Hermione has a few secrets too;D Thanks for reviewing! HarryandGinnyForEver Report Review
Hi! It is me again :) This is good and very funny way to learn english, you know. I absolutely liked this one! Better than previous chapter, I think. I laughted a lot. It would have been super awesome if Ronīs spell had worked this time somhow! That was hilarious how Ronmione tries to hide their relationship from Ginny. Perhaps this was for my taste a little too saccharine. But I know this fic isnīt even close the most yacky romantic stories...Author's Response: I've always wanted to learn another language like this, but I've tried to, and I just can't wrap my head around it. Also, I write what I would say. I, along with almost everyone, butchers the language. I don't edit these either, so there must be quite a bit of mistakes here. I admit it, I wanted to make Ron's spell work too:P I just, couldn't bring myself to do it, I don't know why. Too sweet, I know. It's just my little diary that I get all my Ron and Hermione-ness out in:P Again, thanks for reviewing!:D Report Review
Greetings from Finland! I apologize for the lack of my english skills. This is my very first comment in this forum! And this is also the first chapter/fanfiction I have ever read in here :) Iīm happy that this reading experience was nice. Iīm BIG Ronmione fan. I like your characters - but Ron wasnīt maybe humoristic enought. This was very sweet text, and description was varied. House-elves were strange but good detail. Maybe Hermione placed too much emphasis to the importance of S.P.E.W. And they think too much! xD Just kiss, cīmon, you are 17. But I`m going to read the rest of this fic. =)Author's Response: Greetings from the United States:D And congratulations on the first comment, it's quite fun to review stories. I know this is always my excuse when something like this happens, but I was younger when I wrote this. I was, indeed, a Ron and Hermione fanatic. So, I just felt like I wanted the sweet side of Ron to come out. I just knew it was there somewhere. Now, I know he's not that funny in this one, so that's why I'm rewriting it when the time comes around. I wrote this about two years ago, so it's been quite a while. I wanted them to kiss too, believe me. They are 17, yes, but they were best friends for seven years before sucking it up and kissing each other! The first kiss was a sort of 'we might die tonight kiss, so this is how I feel' kiss. The second kiss sort of seals their relationship because they aren't in a middle of a war where they could die any second. Get what I'm saying? And yes, they do think too much:P I hope you like the rest of the story, and thanks for the review! HarryandGinnyForEver Report Review
Omg I completely forgot about that spell Ronndid in the first year... Haha, thanks for the reminder ;) 10/10Author's Response: xD Thanks for the review:D I'm actually working on this chapter right now...maybe 400 words away from being done ;D So it'll be put in the queue before it's closed...yup:D Thanks for the review! Well, should I say reviews:D HarryandGinnyForEver Report Review
Aww this story is really cute!! I hope you continue it!! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope to continue it too:P HarryandGinnyForEver Report Review
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I like the story. Write thoughts in italics, not like dialogue, it's confusing now. Also, why is everyone sleeping at Hogwarts? Molly would never do that if she had her own home/bed to sleep in... Please leave me a review too! Rated: 7/10 for a nice entertaining read.Author's Response: Thanks for the tip! And the reason I'm making them stay at Hogwarts is because the other fanfictions I have read make them sleep there and it's always how I've seen it. I don't know if you've seen it differently, but this is my way and my story :DDD Report Review
again i love your writing style because like you i love a sappy love story and sometimes its nice to see how relationships flourish and blossom. im waiting for the pregnancy stories of ginny and hermione next. keep up the AWESOME work!!!Author's Response: Pregnancy stories? I've never really thought about that...I'll think about it :D haha. Thank you so much for reviewing (again) jenai mayfield!(: HarryandGinnyForEver Report Review
I really liked this chapter. It really conveys how quickly time goes by and we don't even realize it until we look back and really see how much we change into the people we are today. :) I have had personal experience with this epiphany and I like how you portrayed it. :) Can't wait to read more. :)Author's Response: The way that I described it just hit me one day, and I quite liked it :P It's out there however, I normally don't go up to someone and say 'You are like a tree' but whatever :P Thanks for reviewing potterfreak2!(: HarryandGinnyForEver Report Review
Yaaay! I'm glad you're making this into a longer story. I think that it's really going somewhere. I can't wait to keep reading. :DAuthor's Response: Why thank you(: Thanks potterfreak2 for reviewing!(: HarryandGinnyForEver Report Review
i love it plz continueAuthor's Response: Thank you(: I will ^_^ Thanks for reviewing dracomons3ter10! HarryandGinnyForEver(: Report Review
very cute...and I'm wondering about the darling tree :)Author's Response: Gosh, I don't know where that idea came from xD I was just really tired, I guess(: And I love the tree/Hermione thing, for some weird reason(: Thanks for reviewing Avanell 2!(: HarryandGinnyForEver Report Review
you know what's so funny, is that I've read this prolly five times before, but I never recognize it when I see it, and then I forget to review. I absolutely love this fic. It's sweet and very true to the characters. Great job! I'm gonna see if you have other stories. lol maybe I've already read them. I used to use gremlin as a name 'cause I didn't have a penname, now I do though :) great job! I hope you decide to expand on this story :)Author's Response: You have(; aha. And I remember your reviews! Sometime in spring last year, you reviewed my nine chapters for Harry, Ginny, and Their Love Story(: Aha. And um, expanding the story? I really have no idea. I might...I started to write another Ron and Hermione, but it's not really working out, you know, the "getting together" part? Yeah. Now that I think about it, I'm going to make this a Novella, maybe even a novel, I don't know ^_^ And just an fyi, my H/G story now has 21 chapters...just saying(; aha. Thanks for reviewing! And helping me decide to make it a longer story!(: Report Review
Novvela please pleaseAuthor's Response: I've been thinking about it lately actually(: My new fave couple is Ron and Hermione, so I've been pondering with this for a while. But I'll have to finish my H/G story first, because three WIP stories is just wayyy too much for me at the moment. It'll be a while.so just keep checking in(: Thank you so much for reviewing(: HarryandGinnyForEver Report Review
That was really sweet and romantic! (:Author's Response: aw thank you so much(: This really means a lot to me(: Report Review
it's really cute it would be nice to have a follow-upAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing :) I was origanally going to make it a novella, but I liked it as a one shot :) Thank you so much for reviewing :) Report Review
it's really good i think you should write moreAuthor's Response: haha thank you :) Report Review
I liked it. I thought it was a really good idea. It turned out well and I think you executed it nicely. :)Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! You have reviewed every single one of my posted chapters :) on every story :) Thank you so much :) Report Review
Very nicely done. Sentimental yet just enough awkwardness to show that Ron and Hermione are still in that fun stage of discovery. Too bad it's a one-shot. This could have been an imaginative novella bringing out the best and worst of these two interesting characters and their friends and family. Well done. PWAuthor's Response: Thank you so much :) I had actually intended to write it as a novella, but i decided that I wanted to write it as a one-shot :) Thank you so much for reviewing :) Report Review
W.o.W!!! you are a great writer, I could never write as good as you do. Its sooo hard to find a good hermione and Ron story because they always end up fighting and getting a devorce. You are very talented!!! You really captured the true hermione and Ron relationship and I love that!!! Please keep writing and following your heart!! :>Author's Response: I have no idea what to say to this :) And of course you can write as good as i do, or whatever i write. I don't consider myself to be that good, because i am still a learning writer. Thank you so much for reviewing! I love it! And my heart is being followed :) HarryandGinnyForEver Report Review
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