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7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by ImagineHarmony Waking.

18th July 2013:
Hi!

This is such a beautiful piece of writing. I think you've beautifully portrayed the darkness all the while developing their sad (distressing?) relationship that I felt (and believe me my opinions are always wrong.) was crumbling a bit because of the death. And I just realised this beautifully crafted line: "The fire is dead, but the heat within is not."

I just love how you wrote their dynamics, like seriously, beautiful and ecstatic! The description just sank in softly and gave that feeling that you were creating. This is so creative! All I have is praises for this story!

One of favourite lines have to be this: "He stares up at the never-ending white. It blinds him, but blindness is good. It is a distraction, a distraction from the memories that seem to tumble from the sky and sit heavily on his chest, clawing their way through to his lungs until he cannot breathe." - It is so real and so perfectly described. I love the way you wrote the story and the mixture of emotions and pain Harry felt was so real. And the final line was just a perfect, perfect ending. 'He breathes in. Nothing dies.' - That's him accepting change. JUST PHENOMENAL. I have got to read your other stories!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's wonderful to see my Harmony stories are still gaining readers, and to get such wonderful feedback, too!

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Review #2, by Ashley Waking.

18th July 2012:
Thank you for allowing me to read such beautiful writing.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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Review #3, by Sunflower Waking.

6th February 2012:
I favourited this years back and rereading it now I still love it beyond words. You write beautifully. It would be a shame to put such a gift to waste.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Review #4, by lil_hermione_at_heart Waking.

30th November 2010:
Hm. I like it. Very interesting. I've never read anything like this before (and I've read so many fanfictions and stuff). It's a good change though. I really like it. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it and that you found it different :)

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Review #5, by Erin Waking.

13th October 2010:
This is a little more sombre than what i usually like to read, but it is very well written. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Review #6, by Mysterio Phoenix Waking.

26th August 2010:
Intense,every word and sentence gives me goosebums.I loved reading it and already have read it twice and it doesnt feel enough yet.amazing.waiting to read more of your great writing!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I will definitely be posting more of my stuff on here in time. All of my fics are already published on MugglenetFanfiction though, under the same name. Thanks again for the lovely review :)

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Review #7, by Aidenk77 Waking.

24th August 2010:
Not an easy read, but dark, powerful and emotional. I really enjoyed this story, it's not often something this dark comes along. Just great.

Author's Response: Thanks! I've always wondered what it would be like if one of the Trio died. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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