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Review #1, by FriendofMolly With This Ring

5th March 2016:
DukeBrymin,
Wow. There is more to magic than JKR told. Of course she was dealing with the darker side and the education of minors. But how will Ron and the rest of the Weasleys going to react?
FoM

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Review #2, by FriendofMolly Asking the Question

5th March 2016:
DukeBrymin,
That was the question I forgot to ask in my first review. I'm sure there is a good reason. Just as I'm sure there is nothing sinister about it. I can't wait to read the next.
FoM

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Review #3, by SweetGinny88 With This Ring

5th March 2016:
More more more! Really well written

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Review #4, by FriendofMolly A Wedding Ring

5th March 2016:
DukeBrymin,
An extremely sweet coming home.
FoM

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Review #5, by Marshal A Wedding Ring

5th March 2016:
For the HPFF Review-A-Thon

Hi, I'm Marshal (obviously) I come from the Slytherin house on the forms. We have been having an in house reviewing competition, spreading some snake love while we are at it. Also as you can probably tell from above that there is an review-a-thon going on as well. We have some very generous members who are donating to based on the numbers or reviews left to help keep this site alive and going. With that in mind I saw your fic and decided it could use a bit of love.

Your story has a pretty good start. You handled things very well and very nicely. I like how you brought Harry and Ginny together a bit of playful teasing, a few faux pas before having them just be with each other nothing over done or over the top just a gratefulness to be in each other's arms. Very realistic and nicely done. I appreciate how you didn't jump right into the intimate acts but built your way up to it. Very nicely done. I will say the suddenly appearing ring did catch my interest. Something pertaining to Ginny and Harry being together finally or a nasty little plot twist? Any way, your writing was nicely done and I enjoyed the read.

- Marshal
Team Ouroboros
"The end is only the beginning"

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Review #6, by Mallory A Wedding Ring

2nd September 2010:
I really liked it. It was very well written and indeed good. It seemed like it would be something that would follow the end of the seventh book. It was set right and everything. I thought that it was a very, very good story!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and hope you enjoy the rest of the story as it comes.

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