hi! :) it's iriki from tda and i came in because i was looking at your banner request and your current banner is so pretty, i just had to read it! i absolutely love the OC - i mean, her being the daughter of the Nimbus company was just a really good characteristic that's unique. your descriptions were great too. :)

def added to my favorites - i can't wait to read more.

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Oh wow this is going to be very interesting. I like the whole plot line, with her being in love with her best guy friend (who isn't Sirius Black, thank you originality :) And how she's recruiting Sirius, although that hasn't happened yet. Your OC is very believable and has a wicked humor to her with snappy lines, and you've got that very hopeful/delisional way girls get when they like a guy. So, what I'm trying to say is I like this, a lot. And hope to see an update soon :) And what's with you saying the characterization is weak??? You're a fool, I love your OC already!

~LB

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It means a lot to me that you like Emmaline as an OC and think the plot line is original

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oohhh this is a great start!!! I can't wait to read more!!!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review!

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I think this is a great start to the story. I love it!!! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks, I love your enthusiasm!

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Love this so far!!! Emmaline sounds like a great OC!

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review, it means a lot to me.

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Mm. I think this story will be great~! Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I sure hope to live up to your expectations!

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Aw, i really like this story. You're so descriptive that i can almost feel her pain. I hope you update soon :)

Author's Response: I put a lot of though into my descriptions, I'm really glad you like them. Also, you're my first reviewer! WOOOHOOO!

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