i just love it! I hope you will update soon :D!Author's Response: Thanks! It has been awhile, but the story is all but abandoned! Report Review
Intriguing. Can't wait to see what Remus' reaction will be like!Author's Response: I will get to work on the next chapter soon. ^^ Report Review
i love this, lacey is dead cute, i love the character you're developing for her, remus/oc is my favourite in marauder's era, will keep my eye on this one. well done :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
I like the fact that she hasn't changed yet. My head has so many naughty thoughts about her first change around Remus and what happens afterwards that it really isn't healthy :P
Another great chapter! I like the chain of events better here, that Dumbledore tells her about the Shrieking Shack and then Remus just being a supportive friend.
I hope she tells Lily soon, and I feel like Jodie can be trusted with the information too.
Please keep updating, this is too good :) 10/10 on all chapters!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I noticed you went to FF, that's fine, I tend to forget this site! Report Review
It's nice to see some flashbacks, about how it happened and what her family thinks of it. Though it's sad that they seem scared and angry by it. Thank Merlin for her uncle!
Too bad that Remus stood her up, I was sure he would actually show up this time. But not doing so makes the story interesting! I'm looking forward to seeing how she breaks it to him!Author's Response: I definitely want to get Lacelin's family more involved this time around. Report Review
I read the original version of this story today, and I did like it. It was perhaps a bit quick, in how things progressed, but I liked it. Then I saw there was this rewrite on your profile and I was intrigued.
I can already see from the first chapter that you have put much more work into it. The writing doesn't seem so hurried, and things are explained in more detail, and it is a lot better. You've certainly improved as a writer, I noticed that throughout the chapters of the original Moonlit Nightmares too, that you improved by every chapter.
I hope you keep updating this story, because I'm interested to see how it goes now. If the original version was good, then this must be fantastic!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you see I'm improving, it's what I'm striving for. Thank you for taking the time to leave a detailed review! Report Review
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