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Review #1, by emmacweasley Sleepwalker

8th July 2014:
House Cup 2014 Review

Wow! This was such an emotional piece. I'm not used to reading Harry/Draco, so it too me a quick moment to figure out who was talking (I probably should have paid a bit more attention to the details, should'nt I have?) In the alternate universe where this is possible, it seems like the exact reaction that harry might have to draco dumping him. It's always great to find great AU stories like this and have the characters be so - well, in character! Thanks for the great read. :)

emma

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Review #2, by randomwriter Sleepwalker

8th July 2014:
House Cup 2014 Review: Educational Decree Number Three

Hello there :P
Okay, I'll be honest and admit that this isn't the sort of thing I usually go for. I didn't realise it was Harry initially. I was wondering, a little. How stupid of me! I have absolutely no qualms about slash, but I'm a canon-nut, and I can't quite fathom the idea of Draco and Harry together. But to each one his own, right? ;)

As for your little one-shot, I think you captured post-break up emotions really well. I could relate to how Harry was feeling. The sense of betrayal, the anger, the hopelessness, more anger, frustration, jealousy, stabs of pain, disbelief and a torrent of tears. Yep. Pretty well! And what's more, you managed to do it in so few words. I'm really impressed!

Good job :)

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Review #3, by HeyMrsPotter Sleepwalker

8th July 2014:
Hello! So, admittedly this is the first time I've ever read a Harry/Draco fic and it's not my favourite pairing at all.

That being said, I can fully appreciate how well this is written. I think you've done a really good job of portraying Harry's heartbreak here, especially in this line:
He was all I thought about, all day and all night. He haunted me.

I also liked the little details that you put in about day to day life in and around Hogwarts, the detail about breakfast and the Care of Magical Creatures class.

Their dialogue really help to emphasise the anger Harry is feeling toward Draco and how heartbroken he's reallt feeling.

Not my favourite pairing, but an intersting one-shot nonetheless.

Dee -Hose Cup 2014 review Educational Decree #3

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Review #4, by Ronsgirl29 Sleepwalker

16th August 2010:
Poor Harry! That was so sad! I'm not a huge slash reader, but I really like the angsty-ness of unrequited Draco/Harry. It's always interesting to read.

-ronsgirl29

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Review #5, by Dusty Sleepwalker

15th August 2010:
AWESOME! could not be any better! i need me some hot harry love!!

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Review #6, by Dusty Sleepwalker

15th August 2010:
AWESOME! could not be any better! i need me some hot harry love!!

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