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Review #1, by SOFIA+HUGO The Break Up

21st November 2010:
FLORA!
Se isso for inspirado em mim e no Murilo eu MATO vc. Mas amei a história vc escreve bem d+!
Parabéns!
Ass. Sofia

Author's Response: Sofia é o seguinte: you're supposed to write in English. BTW no way I'd write a story on you and Murilo without Leopoldo! But thanks anyway!

just to be clear it's so not about you and him!


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Review #2, by Aurorofthelight The Family Reaction

31st October 2010:
Great story so far! Always nice to see new & innovative fic ideas come to fruition! Keep up the nice work & update soon! Incidently, Teddy is a Lupin not a Weasley. Victorie is the Weasley.

Author's Response: Oops I guess I made a typing mistake my bad! I'll edit it, just passed me by, trust me I know Teddy is a Lupin! But thank you so much for your review!

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Review #3, by Siriius The Break Up

21st August 2010:
Hmm, I'm actually really liking this already! Teddy/Victoire is my absolute favorite pairing and I can't wait to see what happens, especially since it's only the first chapter. Like the reviewer below me, I honestly think Professor's would prohibit the use of phones in classes but I am liking the idea of using them at Hogwarts, for once. A little tip though; in Britain, cell phones are actually called mobile phones (; I really dislike when British stories are Americanized (I don't mean any offence though!) All in all, a great start. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter :D

Author's Response: Dear Siriius
I'm glad you're liking this story and thank you for the review and the tips. It's not my first story, but I think it's the first one which people actually liked it. About the cell phones I hadn't really thought about the teachers and all, but I'll change from cell phones to mobiles. I'll try to keep all you said in mind when writing the next chapter!


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Review #4, by CornishPixie The Break Up

19th August 2010:
So, I understand that you've explained in your Author's Note that cellphones have been specially made to work at Hogwarts, but I still have a hard time thinking that would be possible. How many years since electricity was made? And still electricity wasn't workable in Hogwarts in any of the books. And even if it WAS, I think the Professors would have some sort of spell thing up that would make a sort of force field so that cellphone's wouldn't be able to be taken into classes.

Anyways, I suppose I just have a hard time accepting that. Otherwise, it's a good story! It needs a quick readthrough because you've missed a couple of punctuation marks, but Victoire's logic does make sense. I do feel worse for Teddy, though. Poor guy didn't expect it. But considering this is the first chapter, I'm interested to see what you're going to be doing with this. There are definitely a couple of ways you could go! Nice job, and keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Dear CornishPixie,

First of all thank you so much for your review, I really apreciate it.

About the cellphones, they are magically created, so they can be around magic. This are very recent creations, so the teachers haven't found a spell yet. I guess I probably should've explained it better.

Thank you also for warning me about the ponctuation marks, I use English as a second language, which makes a little harder for me.

And yes I do feel bad for Teddy, he's such a goog bloke, but you'll se what happens.

I loved this enthusiastic review and please keep reading!


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Review #5, by Harry and Ginny The Break Up

19th August 2010:
Aww I feel bad that Teddy and Victoire have broken up. now I wonder if the rest of the family is going to do something about it... or maybe their friends could do something! Anyway, update soon! This story looks interesting.^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Dear Harry and Ginny, first of all thank you so much for your review, you're my very fisrt. And I also feel sad whenever I read the story cause the way they broke up was, well, sad. I'm glad you liked it and please continue reading!

ps: You'll see what happens next chapter!


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