Woo! Very exciting, haha :) I really liked how you moved time by putting up the news articles. It's a lot more creative than just having the character talk. Yeah so good first chapter! :) can't wait for the next!Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing its much appreciated. chapter 2 is in the works :) will get more intense! Report Review
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