Aw!! That was so good, and it really opens up the soft spot I have for Severus! The ending is so sad, 'I stumbled and ran back, leaving my heart behind'. There is some grammer things wrong, like your I's not being capitalized, so I only give you 9/10... but still, it was FANTASTIC! keep up the good work my friend! And if you find the time, check out my story? ~HayleekinsAuthor's Response: OMG Thankyou ! : ) I will definetly read your story ; ) Thanks again ... Really cheared me up :) JilyRonks xox Report Review
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