nd jc jldbvbnfdnijv. oh. my. god. I LOVE THIS! i thinki can die happy now.please post the next chapter soon, or i think i'll go cry...sadly. Report Review
Please please please start writing again. Your story is really good, and you left it on a cliffhanger! I need tO know what happens! Report Review
AH! YOU ARE A FREAKIN GENIUS AND I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!(again... no homo) OMG OLIVER IS SO CUTE! but i feel bad vibes coming from the future. i sound like a Trelawny! 92/10!
~~VAuthor's Response: OMigosh thank you!!! ANd Oliver is adorable. I love that kid. Thank you so so so so so much! Report Review
haha... "EAT IT, WOOD!" 10/10Author's Response: heheheh:) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!! Report Review
OMFG OLIVER WTF YOU BUTTCAKE! what a meanie bobini slavini (i watch too much of suite life of zack and cody) this was a great chapter!!! 10/10- aw i luv little cho coming for adviceAuthor's Response: Suite Life rocks. Now they're on a boat and now they're not and I'm so confused. THANK YOU SO MUCH! Report Review
oh heidi... pushy pushy isnt she! i cant wait to see more Lupin in this story 10/10Author's Response: Trust me, if I have anything to do with it, there will be much more Lupin:) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
the kiss was cute! but i wish u coulda made it a seperate paragraph! my favorite quote was "I hate the Weasley twins. I really do. If it weren’t for Azkaban, I’d probably have killed them by now." but its not really a quote :[. anyways- you earned another 10/10
~~VAuthor's Response: It's quotish! And I'm glad you like it! Thank you so so so so so much!!! You're the best! Report Review
BEST. CHAPTER. EVA! god i love you so much- no homo- 10/10Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! Once again, thank you my lovely reviewer! You review on so much, and I love you so much for it!! You're the best! New chapters coming soon! Report Review
Nice!!! Theyre gonna date secretly, arnt they? I think they should.Author's Response: Who knows? :) But thank you so much for reading and reviewing, and new chapters will come out soon! Report Review
So flipping good! Love It! Keep up the good work!!!Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! More chapters coming out soon!
SQUEE! That was a lovely chapter. Stupid good for nothing quidditch code should just totally be ignored in favor of snogging in broom closets lol. But I have an idea where this story might be going... something involving secret dating anyway... I hope you update soon :)Author's Response: Snogging in broom closets > quidditch code. And... umm. where would you get that idea...? Hahaha possibly;) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
That was a nice chapter :))Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry for the wait on this story! I'm working on a new chapter! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
can i just say broom closets are my new favorite place? amazing.Author's Response: I agree completely:) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Im glad you liked it! Report Review
Haha. It was so funny!! I think Gabby and Oliver will have some disagreements, but will be able to get through it. The broom closet seen was nice. I have to say, I didn't think Gabby would be so willing... But I like the surprizes. Tehe :). Good job!! Keept it up!! Please update or else I will hex you into Obliviation! Wait- if I do that, how will you update??!! You know what I mean.Author's Response: Bahahahahahaha, it'll be updated soon! I have to update another story first, and I have the write the next chapter too... It might be a little while, but it will come! I promise! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
The broom closet scene rocked! I hope there is going to be some more serious action! Update soon!Author's Response: Thanks! And along the lines of action, there will be more! Update will come soon! Thanks so much for reviewing! Report Review
WAh! they're kissing! omg!!! mega squee!!! I hope she doesn't break the quidditch code! wait... no that's not true! If it means snogging oliver wood, she should just screw the quidditch code!!
thanks for the update!! and soo quick!
-elenaAuthor's Response: Ah! I'm glad you liked it! I've been trying to quickly update more now! And, yes, Oliver and Gabby are snogging. In a broom closet. Gabby might just take your advice;) Glad you liked it! Thanks so much! You're a really awesome reviewer, and I'm glad you like my story! Report Review
I like Kaity. Gabby was funny towards Oliver. I kept giggling... Even though half of it was kind of Sirius... Like the arm bloody part, I couldn't stop laughing. Please continue!!Author's Response: Haha thanks! I have a tendency to write for Marauders so my Sirius-ness might have been showing;) Kaity will be in the story much more later! And I'm glad you liked it! Next chapter will be out soon! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!! Report Review
It was kind of funny to see them argue like that, I mean weird because if you think about it, they have so much in common. I feel Roger Davies will be a last resort type for Gabby. Wood has gotten himself in a pickle and I have to admit, you need to be a genius to get out alive. Knowing the Weasley twins, it'd probably have something to do with Wood getting together with Gabby. I Hufflepuff would win, but that's just my thoughts. If it is like the book/movie Harry would have the Dementor run in.
~Lilygirl_1014Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! Oliver can be an idiot sometimes. Most of the time anyway, and Roger Davies is kind of like that creepy man in a business suit trying to make friends at an ATM... Yeah. Anyway, I'm trying my best to stick with canon! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
I LUV THIS FANFIC OF OLIVER WOOD! i hope u upload soon or some of ur other fans will send a bludger after u!Author's Response: Omigoodness! That wouldn't be fun, but then again, I'm a Beater so it wouldn't be too much of a problem:) I'm updating soon, don't worry! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! :) Report Review
good description and interesting. keep writing, you are very good at it.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! Next update will be out soon! Report Review
WRITE FASTER PERSON! AAUGH!!! I'm getting frustrated! That was SUUUCH a cliff-hanger!
I love it mind you, but honestly... it's getting more apparent that Gabby likes Oliver, and he is so crushing on her too.
^.^ keep writing okie?Author's Response: I'm sorry! The chapter is written and waiting to be submitted to the queue! Thanks so much for reviewing both stories! As for Gabby and Oliver, I'm not saying anything. Anything at all. ;) Next chapter will be out soon! Report Review
I love this chapter more than any other chapter in any other Oliver/OC that I've ever read.
"best snack in the world!"
GOOD JOB!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm kind of, sort of, really obsessed with Remus Lupin. Writing for Heidi is easy for me. We understand each other:) Hope you like the rest of the story! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Oh gawd this is good! Please update fast!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on the update as we speak! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Ohh that fight between Gabby and Oliver was GOD but he went TOO far!!! >:( But I love how Gabby treats Ernie, so like a real brother/sister relationship :) I would say that I want Hufflepuff to win, but Gryffindaor's probably going to but maybe this is the match with the really bad weather when the dementors come? Hmm. Yeah. And Roger Davies is so... eew, he's so smarmy and disgusting. I actually despise him. I think I already said what the quidditch code was like two chapters ago and I think the weasly twins are discussing a bet about Gabby an Oliver? or maybe they need girl help... haha no probably the first one. Great chapter :) xxxAuthor's Response: Oliver's a prat, but I'm not saying much about anything else besides next chapter will be very interesting! Fred and George are clever! You never know... Next chapter will be out soon! Thanks for reviewing!! Report Review
I loved this chapter so much. It made me smile a lot... except for the latter part... stupid Wood... that comment was sooo unnecessary. But meh, I really do hope that Gabby will forgive him... but make him grovel first... or come up with some supercool apology.
Ah the quidditch code... would it be something like... "Thou shalt not date a member of the opposite team?" Rofl...
hope you update soon xAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! You're review just reminded me that I should probably update soon. I'll work on that right now! Wood is a prat, but even prats can be sorry! Gabby likes to hold grudges. That's all I'm saying! Thanks so much for your review! Next chapter will be out soon! Report Review
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