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Review #1, by Karou_Marauder In which two wizards attempt…and fail to go on a whale watch

19th February 2014:
Hiya!

*laughs out loud at Snugglepoo*

*also laughs at "what the Hagrid"*

A few typos here and there but apart from that it's brilliant! So so so funny as well. :D

-Karou

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Review #2, by Fleur Delacour Potter In which two wizards attempt…and fail to go on a whale watch

13th January 2011:
that was really random and funny. :)
Fleur

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Review #3, by Dalek194 In which two wizards attempt…and fail to go on a whale watch

30th November 2010:
Well, there's only one thing I can say to this... HILARIOUS!!! LOL it is a brilliant piece of comic relief! The fact that it's set in the afterlife/underworld makes it all the funnier, especially as they cannot duel or kill, just bicker. And... a whale watch!? (I presume the whales are dead too LOL) And Voldemort's puppy... Snugglepoo!!! LOL! Please write more!

The grammar is almost perfect, gut one section that stood out for the grammar was;

- Suddle Voldemort said. "Dumbledore I can't belueve they canceled the whale watch." Complained Voldemort.
"Suddle" should be "Suddenly", "belueve" should be "believe" and you don't need a capital C for "Complained"

Besides these very minor things... well, all I can say is LOL! I can't wait to hear more about the dead duo's adventures, please update soon!!!

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Review #4, by Ilisten2potterwatch In which two wizards attempt…and fail to go on a whale watch

14th August 2010:
I love it! This is hilarious. Keep up the good work!

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