And those 15 min change their lives for ever! It's crazy to think how little things shape our entire life.

MEL

Author's Response: Sure they do - it's the little things that can change everything ;) Thanks!

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I like this. :) It's just kind of sweet. I have a hard time deciding whether to put quotes in here or not-I like too many. But let's see...
' “Really?!” Sirius exclaimed then. “After everything we've been through and none of us can heal a sprained ankle?” '
That's great. Of course, I may be saying that partly because it's Sirius, but not entirely.
And you can suppose I like their entire conversation, because I do. :) It's really brilliant!

Author's Response: Haha, I like that quote too! But yeah, this is a story for quotes - it's actually all about them, and the conversations!
Thanks for the review!

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Hey!

This was cute. I liked it. I read last week but only got around to reviewing tit today. I loved how James was such a gentlemen and how Lily didn't yell her head off at him the way to the hospital wing. This was different, yet cute. :D

I loved how Lily pretty much agreed to be friends wtih him by asking him to bring her a bag of drops. It was subtile, yet the meaning was still in there and it's totally something I could imagine Lily doing.

Good job! :D

Author's Response: Oh, thanks for coming back to review this! I think of this to be the start if the relationship, as you notice. I always imagine Lily and James to, if they want to, be able to be civil with each other. After all, they were around seventeen at this point, and I think what we've seen of Lily in the books were the absolute worst parts of her. So yeah, no yelling.
Thanks for the review!

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Hi Groundswell :)

I really liked this story - I especially liked the way your portrayed James. Every story I have read has said that he is irresistible, muscly and fantastically toned, and this contrast in features was really refreshing. On the whole - a really sweet story!

~ Falco

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I kind of made a job out of making him normal, because I truly believe that's what he was. After all, we're told James and Harry looks exactly like each other, and Harry wasn't really that special. Thanks for the review!

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That was...interesting, a nice little glimpse into their relationship.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

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So cute! It's adorable, but my only complaint is that your subject-verb agreement is off. Example "Those who doesn't" and "He have to..." But other than that, it's wonderful!

Author's Response: Thanks! I've already fixed it, and thanks for pointing it out!

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aww I really liked that!!!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!

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I think this stoory was really sweet
good job

Author's Response: Thank you!

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You're story's awesome. I love reading one-shots like these. I say you should definitely keep writing! Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! And I will keep writing! :)

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I love the idea of James just being and average person!! Everyone always makes him a stud but I thought it worked well with this story! Made it uber cute :) Well done!

Author's Response: Well, I think he just was an average person. Just look at Harry, (who, we get told, looks exactly like James). So there it is. Thanks for the review!

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