Meanwhile, Ginny was scolding Teddy, "Teddy, I told you can't just apparate in here! Last time you nearly gave Hermione's parents a heart attack."
"Yeah, yeah sorry Aunt Ginny. Anyway, James, Al do you want to go to Diagon Alley tomorrow? I'm going shopping with Fred, Roxie, Victoire, Lucy, Molly, and all the other cousins."
"Ooh!" James sang, "Victoire!"
Teddy turned beet red. "Well then you can go with mummy and daddy," he teased.
"Oh go snog Victoire," James retorted.
Teddy snorted, "Please! Not 'til 8."
I LOVE THAT QUOTE!!! XD And I love this story, especially with Dudley's family not knowing about magic!Author's Response: Thanks! I had a lot of fun writing this one!
~mugglemania Report Review
A very good one shot, done as always in your own unique style. I loved the way Teddy appeared out of nowhere. 10/10. My other chapter should be up and running in the next 24 hours and then I'll post the first chapter of the other story. But I'll not tell you the name, because that would ruin the surprise.Author's Response: Thanks!!! :D
I'll be sure to read your story soon ;) Report Review
This was an interesting concept to be sure. A couple of issues with the flow of the piece but other than that I liked your ideas and your style. Good work! Thanks for posting.Author's Response: Thanks, it's not my favorite story I've written either, but I wasn't sure what to change. I'm glad you liked it though! Report Review
Yay! That was really cool! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)Author's Response: Thanks, but sorry I'm not writing another chapter :( Report Review
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