{reviewid: 2704840, reviewer: 'marauders%20forever%20xx'}
5th June 2012:
i think sirius could have done a better job explaining...i like how you switched points of view but prehaps you should differ the writing a little so they sound like two different poepe. other than that, i loved it!
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{reviewid: 2704823, reviewer: 'marauders%20forever%20xx'}
4th June 2012:
my guess: he likes her
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{reviewid: 2704805, reviewer: 'marauders%20forever%20xx'}
4th June 2012:
your chapters are super short...but other than that, im interested to see where the story is going
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{reviewid: 2614943, reviewer: 'Hotmammabellatrix'}
12th November 2011:
Are you going to finish??!?!! Cuz its really good and I've been waiting for a while...but yeah, its like really good! I love it!
Author's Response: The next chapter will be put into the queue tomorrow probably ;) Thank you so much!
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{reviewid: 2612352, reviewer: 'michaelaflores96'}
6th November 2011:
If I was a cat, I would chase a mouse. But because I'm a human, I read this story. It makes my life and if I didn't come across such linguistic skills I might just have to fall off a cliff because I can't imagine my life being without such amazing stories. The characters make me want to melt to butter and lick myself up and put myself on popcorn. It makes me die a little of happiness inside when I have to wait for another chapter. All I want to do is lock myself in a closet and read this story. STARKIDFAITH, WHOEVER YOU ARE, MAY YOU LIVE ON FOREVER.
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{reviewid: 2612351, reviewer: 'michaelaflores96'}
6th November 2011:
I feel so alive when I read this story like I can do anything! They give me hope!
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{reviewid: 2612350, reviewer: 'michaelaflores96'}
6th November 2011:
I've never seen something as amazing as the words included in this chapter.
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{reviewid: 2612349, reviewer: 'michaelaflores96'}
6th November 2011:
Roses are red, violets are blue, this story is good, because it's written by you!
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{reviewid: 2612348, reviewer: 'michaelaflores96'}
6th November 2011:
i'll take you there p.y.t. because this story is so good!
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{reviewid: 2612347, reviewer: 'michaelaflores96'}
6th November 2011:
magic is the only thing to describe this story, it makes my day
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{reviewid: 2612346, reviewer: 'michaelaflores96'}
6th November 2011:
merry thanksgiving i love this story
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{reviewid: 2612345, reviewer: 'michaelaflores96'}
6th November 2011:
i love this more than potatoes!
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{reviewid: 2612344, reviewer: 'michaelaflores96'}
6th November 2011:
i like this story it's great! TO THE MAX
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{reviewid: 2611044, reviewer: 'carellio'}
3rd November 2011:
AW!
I really like this story and I can't wait for more! I just wish the chapters were LONGER, because this is so goood:)
UPDATE SOON!
Author's Response: Thank you :D The next chapter will be in the queue tomorrow hopefully!
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{reviewid: 2573396, reviewer: 'Shun%20the%20none%20believer'}
18th August 2011:
i'm really really confused
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{reviewid: 2514199, reviewer: 'swimmer99'}
26th April 2011:
keep it up I love the story!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
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{reviewid: 2511265, reviewer: 'hermionefreak'}
20th April 2011:
Nice story!!! Keep it up!! I love the character of Scarlette!
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{reviewid: 2486525, reviewer: '65ashben'}
27th February 2011:
The story is very interesting. The chapter was fantastic. I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! :)
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{reviewid: 2481036, reviewer: 'lilygirl_1014'}
15th February 2011:
Whoa girl!!! Okay the next ones would be sooner, good!! I was about to think you abandoned this! I really like how it isn't from one of the Marauders or Lily's P.O.V. I like how its from someone who isn't them and sees everything in the third person. I wish I could do that better!! Anyway, please continue!! Except maybe this time a little sooner!! :DDD
Author's Response: Hahah I will! :)
Thank you so much for the review!
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{reviewid: 2467329, reviewer: 'lilygirl_1014'}
19th January 2011:
Haha it's funny! Please continue!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sending in the next chapter later today! :)
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{reviewid: 2451118, reviewer: 'ochalke5'}
16th December 2010:
Good chapter, I think however, I am extremely interested to see what happens with this love potion. Great chapter, I look forward to more!
10/10
Good stuff!
Natalie
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review! :)
-Faith
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{reviewid: 2444646, reviewer: 'Marie%20Ann%20Malfoy'}
3rd December 2010:
This is actually a great story. I think you need to make Scarlett's reasons a bit more believable, though, for going out with James. I mean, Lily is her best friend -- she'd be upset if she was mad, yes?
Author's Response: Ahhh I know. :l
Thank you for saying it's a great story, that honestly means a lot! :)
-Faith
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{reviewid: 2438143, reviewer: 'ochalke5'}
21st November 2010:
It's good, I'm interested to see what happens next.
Natalie
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!!! :)
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{reviewid: 2437745, reviewer: 'Elegent%20Lady'}
20th November 2010:
i SAW DEATHLY HALLOWS 2DAY AND IT WAS BRILLIANT!
10/10 loved your chapter and basicly I love this story!
Author's Response: It was so amazing, I loved it too! I cried a bit at the end. :')
Thank you so much for the review, it means a lot! (:
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{reviewid: 2430123, reviewer: 'Elegent%20Lady'}
31st October 2010:
I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE WRITE MORE?!?
Author's Response: Haha, don't worry I am! :)
November might not have a lot though because I'm participating in the NaNoWriMo!
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