this piece show the real pansy & draco.. love your writing style!! Report Review
"He was funny. He shared the same values she did. And, perhaps most important of all, he put up with her. Capricious, spoiled, Pansy was rarely bearable." Love it, that's exactly how I imagine it too.
"He smirked, and Pansy knew she'd hit a nerve. He'd mask it - oh, of course he'd mask it." Perfect!
Oh the last lines made my stomach hurt :(
Jerk, Draco! Not exactly as I characterize him so I don't quite agree, and I also don't believe (on contrary to the majority of all D/P authors) that Draco always has the upper hand and Pansy's the one simpering after him, but it was good nonetheless! Report Review
And even when she wasn't laying back and thinking of England, they had perfectly civilized conversations.
that made me laugh!! excellent reference ^_-
this was wonderfully sad. i really felt for her, for the situation she was in. its an ageless one, loving someone you can't truly have, but you made me feel like i was reading it for the first time, like i was reading draco and pansy for the first time. your characterisations were unlike any i have read before, where he is intentionally cruel and she, sappy and in love, irrational. here, they are adults, if you will. they are mature and sensible, and in love.
wonderful! another beauty from kali!
kate xx Report Review
I don't know that I've read any of your work, save for this, but I'll most certainly have to. This was beautiful -- sweeping, grey, and passionate. I've never before read an accurate characterisation of Pansy that made me feel so empathetically for her. Draco's character too was horribly accurate. Though I knew he wouldn't, I earnestly hoped that he'd take her offer, sweep her off her feet and all that jazz. The description was delicate and grey and I could feel the cold hearth and even colder rain as I read it.
This story connected with me. It screamed out at me (though in a soft sort of voice) and made me analyze my own life. That is a fabulous thing for a one shot to do.
Melissa Report Review
I really liked this. It was emotion and character growth nicely put together. It was well written and had depth. Good job!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you liked it. :) Report Review
aw, sadness D: but you write the relationship between Draco and Pansy so well and you get their characters so well too! I never really liked Pansy, but you made me feel sorry for her and gah. You rock Author's Response: I LOVE YOU. And, um, dude. Look who's talking. Can't wait to see that story posted!! Thank you so much for posting, Enya. Love. XOXO, K. Report Review
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