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Review #1, by lizmusic45 My Version Of The (Un)Shoelace Scene

1st May 2011:
I like this one a lot better to be honest, and I'm happy you changed it. Lizzie

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it.

~Soraya~


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Review #2, by Pacific Wizard My Version Of The (Un)Shoelace Scene

6th April 2011:
BWB: Great dialogue and plot. You nailed the characters. You are a true romantic. Any reader can feel the emotion in your stories. Hope you continue on with this story. While JKR is amazing, I also feel the same as you do about the romance in her HP series. She didn't explore the H/G relationship as many would have liked and her scenes left a lot to the imaginations of her readers. That's why I'm glad you picked up on this and gave us an awesome storyline to satisfy our imaginings. Please keep on with this story. Well Done. PW

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Granted, this is one of my older fics and I've come quite close to deleting it, so getting a review like this has made me think twice. The plot was *cough*stolen*cough* from Warner Bros, admittedly, but I'm flattered that you think the dialogue and the characters were so good, as well as the emotion. As for the romance in Harry Potter, well, it was never meant to be a romance novel, was it? That's what fanfiction is for, I suppose. And while I doubt I'll continue this story, there are some other H/G oneshots which you might like. As well as that, I have a James/Lily WIP going, and that's my baby at the moment, so if you like James/Lily I'd be so very grateful if you could read and review it. On HPFF I haven't got the most wonderful reception in terms of reviews -- the James/Lily one in particular. Once again, thank you so much for reviewing and I hope you do so again on my other Harry/Ginny oneshots (A Different Kind Of Magic and its sequel, A Different Kind Of Magic 2:Parenthood as well as Out Of My Life, which I suppose is a sequel to The Shoelace Scene) as well as Checkmate, my James/Lily story. It's currently at 31-odd K but the story's completed. I'm just waiting for my chapters to be beta'd and then I will post them as soon as possible. Ta!!

~Soraya~


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Review #3, by hp481516 My Version Of The (Un)Shoelace Scene

1st November 2010:
This was awesome! I liked it soo much better than the actual shoelace scene in the movie. They should have used this instead haha. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for thinking it was awesome :D I wish they didn't make it so weird; Ginny made that creepy move just to flirt, and, no offence, but who flirts by offering to tie their shoelaces? Thanks for the review.

~Soraya~


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Review #4, by spencefa My Version Of The (Un)Shoelace Scene

31st October 2010:
chapter was good, just too short.

Author's Response: Yeah, I know it was a bit on the short side. My other stories are slightly longer, but I still stick to one-shots. Anyway, thanks for your review, and rest assured that all my future one-shots are going to be well over 2,000 words!

~Soraya~


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Review #5, by charlottetrips My Version Of The (Un)Shoelace Scene

31st October 2010:
I liked that better than the shoelace scene! That seemed a bit off to me, this seems more in character

Author's Response: Thanks! It took me a while to clock on that the nature of the shoelace scene was so...ew, so I kinda changed it, so it was more innocent. I'm glad you liked it.

~Soraya~


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