i love all your stories! please write more! :] 10/10 all the wayyAuthor's Response: Aw thank you, I'll do my very best! :') Report Review
Ahh! I wanted her to say yes! Really well written- and I've read a lot of these. You speak from the first person perspective with a great deal of insight and very smoothly. I love the way you have James feel towards Lily. Like he's falling in love again and again and just can't help it.Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much for the praise! Aha, the whole idea is that everyone wants Lily to say yes, but she doesn't ;D Muahaha success! Thank you very, very much, I am really glad you enjoyed it, and you've captured the whole message right there! Thank you! Report Review
Yeah, actually I am foreign. I'm from Germany that's why I wondered...
Well I hope I don't have too many spelling mistakes ;)
And where do you came from, (if you can ever answer*g*) ?
PS. Another question, if it isn't too privat. Are you a boy? Because Nickolas seems like a boys name and I always wonder if boys do also read (and write) fanfictions here.
Would be quite cool to know one!Author's Response: Haha, not too many spelling mistakes ;) And ye olde england for me, hooray! And yup, I'm a guy, which I know is weird around here and we are a rarity - I just tend to end up sounding like a girl anyway... haha. But um, I don't think we should have a conversations over reviews ^_^' Dunno how that'd go down with the staff. So - until your next review! Which I really do appreciate, thank you very much!! My best reviewer :D Report Review
Well, how to start.
... I really like this story and it's something else as the usual "Go out with me" and then Lily surprisingly answeres "Yes" stories (although that doesn't mean, that I don't like them) but this is kind of more real.
And it's sad. But maybe it's so real, because it's sad...
Cause not everything has a happy end. Whereas we know, that there is a happy end for the two of them in the end...
And this story is like the time till the happy end... and that is the reason why it's not too sad for me. Because I know that they are going to be hapy together sometime.
Was this confusing or did you get it? Well I hope the latter;)
Kay, I think that was enough of my bewildering thoughts for the moment;)
PS.:Do you speak German? Just because you wrote "danke" in on of the Author's Responses.Author's Response: Ah hey Sweets! (this my new nickname, haha) - it is absolutelyamazingtotallyawesome to see you on another one of my stories! Thanks!!
Yeah, it was definitely the intention for it now to be an "and they all lived happily ever after" story, because life doesn't always work that way ;) (although I do love the happily ever after's too xD) James will get his happy ending - just not in this story! Haha, I do get you, a very good explanation :) Thank you so, so, so, much for this review - it really is amazing! :D Thank you, my most fave person ever!
(PS. I don't actually, haha, unfortunately. Guten tag and danke are as far as I go, haha! I'm a spanish man, that's my only foreign language. Although a question for you, if you can ever answer (xD) - are you foreign? :) you seem foreign, and it's quite cool!) Report Review
Oh my. lily is such an effing bitch. this is really written well. this is a really good story about James point of view. hm. :DAuthor's Response: LOL! Lily is definitely very mean to poor James >:( Ahh, I'm really glad you liked it, not many people did XD Thank you! Report Review
I loff it as usual... As surprising as it is, I never really have anything bad to say about your stuff. It always makes me happy. Thanks for putting a smile on my face. Author's Response: Aw. I LOFF YOU KATE!! xx
And I'm suprised... I don't much like this XD It was a bit of a fail really... but I'm glad you liked it anyway. Thanks again kate, I really, really appreciate this! Report Review
I like this but it feels unfinished. I dont know.Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! :) I do get what you'e thinking, and I'm gonna take it back to the drawing board and work on it a bit more ;) Danke! Report Review
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