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Review #1, by Freda_and_Georgina Merope

30th December 2015:
I (Georgina) have never read anything from the perspective of death, so this is really interesting to me. I like how you have death be a person without really being a human; that is a necessary distinction. I also like how you've set this up as a sort of war between Voldemort and Death, declared by the former and won by the latter.

Since this has been abandoned, I assume you would like ideas to refresh your interest in this story (if not, I'm going to give them to you anyway, maybe it'll help). It would be really interesting if you followed Death taking the people Voldemort killed to specifically slice his soul. There might be some problems there because we don't know all the "special" murders, but I'm sure you could work with that. Another thing you could do is follow the deaths that became vital to Harry's mission (his parents, Cedric, Sirius...). Ooh! What if Death somehow created a way for Voldemort to die? Like Death created the prophecy to make sure someone could still deliver him to Death. I don't know if you could do anything with that idea, it's kind of far-fetched, but I'm just giving you all these ideas to get your creative juices for this story flowing.

This is a really good idea that you can take in several directions. Please upgrade it to WIP status; I kind of want to keep reading your personification of Death.

Enjoy your hot seat day! Hopefully you got what you were looking for.
--Georgina

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Review #2, by Felpata Lupin Merope

28th December 2015:
Thinking of Tom Riddle as "Small, frail, innocent, beautiful" is disconcerting... But of course he would be when he was just born.
It is so sad and tragic that Merope just let herself go, without the tiniest bit of resistance. But it's also very much in character with the little we know from canon about her. I think you did a great job with the episode, really well written and set really well in canon. Great work!

I'm enjoying the story a lot so far. It's such an original idea, the pov is so unique and interesting and the subject so fascinating. Absolutely, get back to this story.

Love, hugs and cuddles.
Chiara

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Review #3, by Felpata Lupin Prolouge

28th December 2015:
Hello, Katie, dear!
Here for your late Hot Seat. :)

I decided to stop by here, since you wanted reviews on your abandoned stories and you had only one here... Which is a pity, because this is a really fascinating concept so far!

I loved your interpretation of Death, its ironic tone, the humans' misunderstanding... It's so incredibly clever, and very interesting.

It's also so very interesting Death's anger to murderers, and to Horcruxes, and to Voldemort. And I really can't wait to read more, so I'm jumping to chapter 2 now!

Great job as always! Definitely, you should start working on this again!

All the Pygmy Puff's cuddles,
Chiara.

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Review #4, by Potter_Princessx3 Prolouge

30th July 2010:
Hey Sunny,
Great prolouge it's very detailed and I like it! But i do have a question or two to ask you if you don't mind:
- Im guessing this is Voldemorts prolouge?
- Also in the last paragraph i think he's talking about Harry...?
Hm.
Great great great job!
I really love it and can't wait for the next, im even adding it to my favorites.
Whenever you get the chance feel free to check out my fanfictions! (:
- Autumn
8/10 ofcourse! :D

Author's Response: Hey! thanks for the review, and the favorite! :) It's not Voldemort talking, I won't tell you who it is now, but hopefully you'll get it soon. If you don't, of course I'll let you know. lol (Here's a hint: It is not exactly a PERSON talking.)
Thanks again for the review, I'll check out your stories soon!


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