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Review #1, by Hayleekins I don't bite.

29th December 2010:
It was a very good start!! I think that it would have been really cool if you would have, i dunno like built up to the climactic killing scene... BUT I'm not sure if the Mods. would go for it... Still it was a pretty dang good start! Keep up the good work!
Happy Holidays, and Happy Writing,
Hayleekins

Author's Response: Yah, I think I should have had more suspense, now that I look back on it. But I wrote this in about one night just as sort of a rebellion against the "twilight vampire" stories where they love you and protect you. I'm editing a lot of my story so I'll probably get to this one sooner or later. Thanks for the advice and review!

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