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Review #1, by RosieRose This mess

25th November 2010:
I like it! Angelina's one of my favorite characters, so I love reading stories about her. I wish that this one was a bit longer though, it was so good!

Author's Response: Thanks, that's great to hear! Ah, sorry about that, I'm glad you liked it anyway! :)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Review #2, by massieblockrox This mess

9th October 2010:
Awesome song fic! Love Story is one of my favorite Taylor Swift songs. I like how Angelina is with both twins, sort of. Great job!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's good to hear that you liked it!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Review #3, by SexyDoorFrames This mess

16th August 2010:
Excellent beginning. I loved how the beginning and the ending tied together. You did that really well. I loved the fact that you had george's feelings start at school, considering we know the future, it just adds a little 'aw' affect to it. I loved the way you showed her relationship with both twins, especially Fred.

In all, really good one shot.



Author's Response: Thank you very much!
I'm glad you liked that, thanks! I figured that George might as well have liked Angelina already when they were still in school - perhaps those feelings weren't there all the time between the Yule Ball and (after) DH, but it's possible that he liked her back then. So it's good to hear you liked that too :)
I'm getting repetitive, but I'm glad you liked those relationships as well!
Thanks a lot for this great review! :D

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Review #4, by Akussa This mess

10th August 2010:
Hi! I stumbled upon this story looking for a twin/Angelina story and I liked it. I liked the idea that Angelina wasn't aware of George's feelings for her but mostly, I like the fact that you didn't make Fred and her a lovy-dovey couple. I always find it a bit strange when I read stories where she was so in love with Fred but ended up with George after the first twin died...
So, that's it; good little fic, not the greatest I've read from you (going thrgouhg most of your work as I write this) but I had a good time reading it nevertheless.

Author's Response: Hi! :)
That's good to hear, of course; I'm very glad you liked it! I know, I'm a bit iffy about those stories as well. I mean, yes, they went to the Yule Ball together, but that doesn't have to mean anything. And the idea of Angelina just marrying George if she'd always been with Fred... surely George must have more dignity than that, right?
Thanks, and I know. I'm glad you liked it anyway, and hopefully you liked the rest as well ;)
Thank you for your review!

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Review #5, by MidnightBlue_x This mess

7th August 2010:
Hey, This is ElysiumJayne from over at the forums. First of all I want to thank you for entering my challenge. I really like how you included the lyric in here and the fact it's the Twins/Angelina. I don't think there are enough fics of them which is sad cause they're defintely one of my favourites to read. So once again, Thanks for entering. Hope to see more of you in the future.

x Ely

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for issuing the challenge ;)
Oh, that's good to hear. I wasn't sure if it would make a lot of sense, so I'm glad that you think it did. I agree, there aren't many fics about them and I think that that's what made me write this fic about them.
I'll try my best! Thank you for the review!

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Review #6, by moonbaby11 This mess

6th August 2010:
I liked the idea of this, how Angelina and Fred jst went as friends and she didn't know George liked her. It kind of sets them up for the Epilogue where they are married, so I like that.

I liked when George pulled Angelina into the closet, because I thought that was kind of funny. :) Anyways, I don't think that anything's mentioned about the twins after the Yule Ball, so you're good to go there.

Great idea and great story! Keep up the great writing. I really liked it. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you did! I never really understood why people made such a big deal out of this - Angelina going to the Ball with Fred, and marrying George later on. So yeah, that's why I chose this approach :)

Haha, that's good to hear. I figured that George should keep at least part of his fun and pranking nature and this seemed like something he might do :) Oh, and that's great too. I didn't think so either, but I wasn't sure.

Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it. And I will ;)
Thanks for the review!

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Review #7, by ravenclawgrl This mess

29th July 2010:
this is really good i was a bit anoyed that there was nothing about the twins and the yule ball, well nothing about george i wonder who he went with
anyway really good thanks xx :D xx

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you think so! I'm sorry to hear that, but then again, the story wasn't really about the twins (well, it was, but not about them doing twin stuff and all that) or the Yule Ball itself, but more about the aftermath.
I'm glad you liked it anyway, and thanks a lot for your review!

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