That's perfect! I love how you had a twist at the end with George and his wife! Not what I was expecting...SOO much better than what I was expecting! Brilliant work! =) Report Review
This is great! I never would've thought of matching this song (one of my favorites btw :)) with a storyline like this but it turned out great. So sad but that bit of hope! Report Review
This was beautiful. I really love this ship and you write it perfectly. I love the fact that it ended with baby Freddie. Just so awesome. And the last line, just summed the whole story up. Perfect way to end the story.
- Keely/SexyDoorFramesAuthor's Response: Oh wow I think this is the best review I've ever gotten :) The freddie part wasn't even in my original idea, it was supposed to be just fred and george but as I was writing it just fit in so well and it gave it a much better ending than the original. And I loved the idea myself so I kept it. -East Juliet Report Review
I really like it!!! Keep writing!!!Author's Response: Thanks, glad you like it :L Report Review
Totally cute. I really liked it and the the lyrics were really well suited to Fred and George.
(Just as a side note -- to help out is my only cause -- you swapped to first person for a paragraph and then back to third for the rest.)Author's Response: Thanks thats what I'm worst at. So glad you liked it :L Report Review
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