I really love how you titled the chapter based on the word that was said so many times to emphasize Rose's thoughts. Kudos! By the way, I think 'hear hear' in paragraph 22 is supposed to be 'hear her'. :)Author's Response: Ah, thank you! I shall go and change that as soon as I can. Thanks for pointing it out. :)
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I'm not one to read Teddy/Rose fics, but this was cute. I rather liked it. Of course, I really liked that Rose didn't think to use the front door rather than climb the wall. Any normal person would have rung the bell or knocked or something lol. It was all so cute though. Wonderfully written - though I can't say much in terms of style since I've never read anything by Becca - I did enjoy this fic.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate the review.
Ah, Rose. She's kind of got a mind of her own, doesn't she? And I was never really one for Teddy/Rose either until Becca suggested that it was her favorite pairing. Either way, I had a ton of fun writing it and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Ok, this story was adorable.Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
Awww! This is very cute, not to mention hilarious. Rose is so funny, working things through in a way that she thinks is logical, but utterly backfires on her. Anyway, it was more fun climbing the plant. It reminds me both of Rapunzel and spy films, which makes for an odd combination, but they work for this story.
I especially loved it when you got into Rose's head, as those comments were the funniest - like the "Blast. Hadn't thought of that" one at the end. One line stood out as not working as well, and that was when you moved out of Rose's mind and into telling "Rose was not known as a patient person." It didn't seem necessary to me, though it could be doing something I haven't noticed.
I really liked this story. It's another sweet addition to the Teddy/Rose collection here. ^_^Author's Response: Ah! I had completely missed that! I will definitely go back and fix that once the Queue opens again!
SUSAN you are a wonder. ^^ I wasn't particularly proud of this one, but it was a lot of fun to write! I'd never written Ted / Rose before either, so I'm really glad I've got reassurance from someone who is a master at the ship.
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So I just stumbled across this in Recently Added. I love the characters you've created here; even though we don't really get any back story or what's going on, I'm inexplicably pulled into the story and I immediately loved both characters.
This is definitely something I'd like to see more of, shame it's a one-shot! Anyway, great job, loved the simplicity of it, and I hope you continue to write lovely things like this! :)Author's Response: Oh, thank you! This is such an unexpected review, and it just warmed my heart.
I just started writing this after listening to the "Knight and Day" score, and then the fiction just sort of... wrote itself! Thank you so much for liking Rose. She's a little different (a lot different) than how I normally write her, but I'm glad you liked her!
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Ahahahaha, this was lovely Rin! I told you you'd do a much better job of my style than me :P. It sounds really weird, but it did remind me of my writing, especially the repetition of maybe and perhaps XD. I never realised I did that.
Well, this was gorgeous and lovely and really just supermegafoxyawesomehot work :P. I loved the plotline - it was simple, light and funny and the style worked really well with it :D.
I adored the characterisations. you know Tedrose is one of my favourite pairings, and I love how you wrote it here. Rose was funny, impulsive and quite romantic in my eyes (I loved all the fairytale connections you get with the climbing up to the window, except Rose is the prince XD). And in the little we saw of him, Ted was great too :D.
I liked the ending too! Open ended, which I love (and write) :P.
Just overall gorgeous Rin. I love it!Author's Response: YOU ARE AMAZING.
Especially because you're not coming to my house with a pitch-fork, demanding that I take this down because it's an insult to your work. :D Thank you so much! Your compliments are the greatest compliments of all.
This just sort of wrote itself, I suppose. I read your work, saw your short, blunt, lovely little style and TRIED (TRIED) to mimic it. I'm ever so pleased that you liked the outcome!
I HEART BECCA.
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