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Review #1, by Potterpower Where Have You Been All My Life?!

20th July 2012:
Wow this is great! I think this story will be amazing! Please update soon!
10/10

Love Potterpower
Xx

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Review #2, by Scriptie Where Have You Been All My Life?!

2nd April 2012:
There's quiet a few spelling and grammatical errors but I like the story so far. A long lost sister. That's a nice addition. Can't wait for more :D
-Scriptie

Author's Response: Tbankyou, I dont think im gonna continue with it though. If you want to take over it, feel free. I had paired up ron with lestranga, harry and ginny, draco and hermione. Also, I wanted draco to be put in gryffindorf and to be part of the group. Unless you think I should continue? If so messages me.

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Review #3, by habigy Where Have You Been All My Life?!

19th July 2011:
OMG OMG OMG I KNOW IT IS A STORY YOU WROTE A WHILE AGO BUT PLEASE CARRY IT ON PLEASE

Author's Response: Thank-you, for reviewing, I dint know if anyone would like it so, I haven't continued with it. If you have any advice PLEASE let me know! I'm a big reader, but writing us harder for me. I'll update soon.


Kayla~


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Review #4, by cywol Where Have You Been All My Life?!

18th July 2011:
It's an interesting idea, however you need to tidy up your language and grammar a bit! Also, you should probably rethink some of the dialogue; your character Lestranga speaks for a long time uninterrupted, which is not altogether plausible considering what she's saying to Harry! You have the main thing though, which is the idea itself; you just need to make sure you have clarity of expression throughout :)

In other words: an interesting start, but perhaps have a look into the spelling and grammar aspects! :)

Author's Response: Thank-you!!! I'll look into it.


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