I loved this chapter. I was really enjoying it but it appears to have been abandoned? I sincerely hope you decide to update again.
Thanks for the wonderful four chapters,
Please upsate soon. :-) Report Review
I absolutely loved that chapter. I know Remus is just looking out for his friends, but Jaime was right when she said that he was acting a bit out of character. He seemed a little harsh, but I liked it. Poor Jaime. I hope she realizes that they don't really care what she is. I can't wait for more. Update soon! :)Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the chapter. I was a little unsure of it, myself. I'll update as soon as I finish this chapter. You don't know how much it means to me that you've been following my story!!! Thank you!!! ^.^ Report Review
I like how close Jaime and James are starting to get. It makes me happy. Same goes for the other boys. I can't wait to see how her relationship with all of them develops. Update soon! :)Author's Response: Thank you for always reviewing. I'll update as soon as possible. As you may have noticed, I like responding to the few reviews I get. I was reluctant to post the last chapter because I thought they might be getting closer too fast, but I'm glad you like it. Report Review
I like the spanish that is mixed in with the reading. Whenever I read it I try to figure out what it means. (I quit spanish and I must admit that I miss it a little) I wish my eyes could change color. That would be so cool! My friend says that I have eyes like the vampires from Interview With A Vampire. Idk, I have never seen it. I like this story! Update soon! :)Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I'm in Spanish 2 (again) right now (even though I did good in the class). I never saw the movie, either, but it sounds cool. I read the first half of the book b4 I lost it. ^.^; I'll be sure to update as soon as possible! Report Review
I thought "No sť (se)," meant 'No Say' or, at least, thats how I pronounced it. @___@;
She speaks Spanish. Cool! >:D
I like this story a lot so far. I can't wait until the next chapter! C:Author's Response: Yeah, she speaks Spanish. I speak a little, so I guess it works out. It is pronounced "No Say", but it means I don't know. The accent belongs there, and I'm glad you like the story so far. I'll have the next chapter up as soon as possible! ^.^ This is my first story on any site, so I'm glad to have positive reviews. Thanks! Report Review
I love this story. I don't think I have heard this idea before. I'm talking about the whole James Potter lost twin thing. It's an awsome idea. I can't believe her parents would send her to an orphanage just because they got into a fight. When I was younger I got into a fight with my brother and when I punched him I knocked a tooth out. Haha. It was just a baby tooth though. Can't wait to read more. Update soon! :)Author's Response: I'm glad you like the idea. ^.^ I know that the whole predicament sending her to the orphanage was a bit extreme, but there were other underlying problems. I hope I can write the story fast enough while still keeping it together. ^.^; I'll have the next chapter up as soon as possible Report Review
this seems to be an intersting start to a story. I can see this story taking many different plot lines. i cant wait to see which one you choose to pick!
~Bri-BriAuthor's Response: Truthfully, I'm waiting to see that as well. This story isn't as planned as I would like ^.^; I'm glad you think it's interesting, and hopefully it turns out in a way you would like. Report Review
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