Reading Reviews for Facing Fate
363 Reviews Found

Review #1, by UnrequitedLove Homecoming

15th August 2015:
Head Boy Draco and Head Girl Hermione is my favorite cliche. I will never tire of it. I love how you are portraying Ron with his humor and everything. Most Dramione fics make him into the unreasonable horrible boyfriend who either doesn't care or just smothers her. A character you have no difficulty hating. It's just lazy writing. Solving the problem before it even gets there. I can't wait to see how Hermione handles falling for Draco while Ron is her boyfriend.

I admire how you are staying true to the characters as J.K. Rowling wrote them. It's easier to write the characters as you want them to be or have them react as you would. But in this I recognize all the characters, not solely the names.

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Review #2, by Onediedforlove Flourish and Blotts

14th August 2015:
I love fanfiction but I hate the poor writing skills I constantly find on this site. You're competence is a breath of fresh air.
Small critique: You are not portraying Hermioine's character correctly. Her personality should be calmer than this. You have her reacting to Draco like Harry or Ginny would.

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Review #3, by p0tter fan Flourish and Blotts

16th September 2013:
i love the ending to this chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! =D

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Review #4, by Batmanrishi The Stunning Spell

31st July 2013:
NIce one. Seems like the thing Ron would have done He is such a ladies man after all

Author's Response: I'm not sure if you are being sarcastic, but it serves the purpose in the story. He's not a ladies man, he's an idiot lol

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Review #5, by _Lumos_ Epilouge

30th July 2013:
I hope you know that, that last chapter seriously made me cry! Dean's nice and all and I could see you hinting towards it in the past chapters but DRACCOO!! D': Everything is crazy now and I'm so confused and oh my god why do you have to write to so well! I've been up since five thirty in the morning sunday, to 7 in the morning Monday reading this and now I don't know what to do with my life :((( This is an amazing read though, absolutely brilliant!

Author's Response: there is a sequel in progress if you want to read that one now =)

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Review #6, by dramione A Hundred Letters or The Howler

29th June 2013:
Plots good..but it'd have been better if you had a spell check..weasly and pravati? My god!

Author's Response: Sorry, I didn't have spell check when I first wrote this.

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Review #7, by KeeganH Epilouge

22nd April 2013:
I couldn't stop reading the story!! I loved every chapter and every word! Can't wait to read the next part!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I am glad you enjoyed it and you want to continue =D

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Review #8, by Traveler94 Future Plans

8th April 2013:
Id be so pissed if a guy slept with me and ignored me the next day or week-especially if it was only the second time we did it.

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Review #9, by claire The Stunning Spell

2nd April 2013:
So good so far! Love it

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Review #10, by Mickey Flourish and Blotts

1st April 2013:
I love love love the story, it so awesome but I don't understand the thing with Hermione's name. Could you explain?

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Review #11, by Charlee The Stunning Spell

15th January 2013:
I love this chapter so much. Your writing style astounds me. Usually when I read fan fiction I know it's just fan fiction but, in all honesty, when I read your writing I have to remind myself that this isn't an actual Harry Potter book. Btw Ton is such a git!

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Review #12, by amna The Daily Prophet

5th January 2013:
good, but i expected hermione to fight back and yell at ron after he said he was finishing off his relationship with her, after all she's hermione and a strong enough to fight with ron didn't expect her to disolve into tears. :/

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Review #13, by BabyshoesBlack (A.K.A Nikki) Epilouge

30th December 2012:
Cliffhanger endings don't work for me!! But I'll give you a 1010 anyways! Loved it. I just hope Dramione get back together *pleading face*

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Review #14, by Jordan Intelligence

19th December 2012:
I would love a sequal

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Review #15, by Sarah Flourish and Blotts

23rd November 2012:
I loved this chapter, and how you ended it! I was totally saying "Aw" (: Awesome job! x

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Review #16, by mugglemaeble The Stunning Spell

20th November 2012:
Amazing story! I'm hooked!

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Review #17, by DumbledoresArmyOfOne Draco's Release and Bella's Wand

17th November 2012:
hello, i'm here from confrontationally challenged :D
I really liked this first chapter. It moved along quickly even though there was some backstory to tell.
the bit about Fred was sad, but seemed like it could be developed a little bit more.
The story looks like it's off to a great start!

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Review #18, by say what? The Stunning Spell

9th November 2012:
I love the idea in this chapter, it was great but there are things I do not understand because of your horrible grammar and spelling errors. I would like clarification on what you meant by "he said they were dulling to practise for class but his spell was too powerful". Also, what did Ginny mean when she said she was "so strange" in her recount of Malfoy attacking Ron. Thanks.
*practice is spelt with a c, not an s. Your words, not mine.

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Review #19, by nuhlified Epilouge

29th October 2012:
I hate u for making it end like this feel these pitch forks I'm throwing at u thats my hate 4 the end u give me an amazing beginning a breath taking middle and then you make a cliffhanger end jeez

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Review #20, by K beat A Hundred Letters or The Howler

11th October 2012:
Only thing that would make it better...
Remember in Goblet of Fire when Rita Skeeter wrote that Hermione was in a love triangle with Harry and Viktor Krum and all Harry's fans sent her an abundance of hate mail? I was expecting that for Ron, rather than just one howler.
But halfway there with Hermione getting lots of support :)

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Review #21, by K bear The Stunning Spell

11th October 2012:
I couldn't understand why you were so keen for Ron and Hermione to break up, coz I thought she would've been the one that broke up with Ron for Malfoy. Never did I imagine Ron would do the cheating!! I loved the chapter, felt actual anger toward Ron, a gooey feeling toward Malfoy and felt very sorry for Hermione.

You are a very good writer

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Review #22, by Me The Dusty Pink Mask

24th September 2012:
I'm not sure if you're aware but it's Parvati Patil, not the way you've been spelling it, and Draco has steel grey eyes, not steal.

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Review #23, by Courtney THE Quiddich Match

9th September 2012:
Wow you really scared me at the end! I thought Draco lost all of his memory like in some other Dramione's. But u kept it original so I'm really happy. The only thing that concerns me is one of the chapters names... Rons death.any way cant wait 2 read more! 10/10

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Review #24, by Molly prewett The Stunning Spell

9th September 2012:
This was such a great chapter I wanted to hit Ron and hug Draco.

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Review #25, by ISB Homecoming

8th September 2012:
Platform 9 1/3? no no no!
Other than that its good

Author's Response: haha sorry, i meant to change that!! =/ im revising it so i'll get to it then!

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