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Review #1, by gran/ger Chapter 3

13th July 2011:
Bravo, encore, we want more! You'll do; but seriously I marvel at how such concise chapters can be so satisfying! Truly less is more with your story so far. I think I'm probably an admirer of your style because I'm rather verbose. Shades of Ernie Macmillan; but only when I write thank God! I look forward to your next posting.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for all of your reviews. :) You are very nice and I'll try to get ch. 4 up soon.

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Review #2, by gran/ger Not This Time

13th July 2011:
You're doing great! Stick to your way of telling the story because it's about both of them. We need to know what's in both their heads or the story will be a complete bust! Your abilities as a story teller are better than you think; so down with negative thoughts! I'm looking forward to the next chapter; and will let you know what I think.

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Review #3, by gran/ger Watching You

13th July 2011:
It's the first time ever that I've been satisfied by so short an intro. You got it right! Everything encapsulated to perfection! I have been charmed into wanting to read on because it seems to be worth it. Now to read on; and I'll let you know my opinion afterwards.

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Review #4, by JCCJ Chapter 3

13th July 2011:
This is a great piece of work! I love the imagery and air of mystery that surrounds the entire piece! I personally feel that you would do better to continue with the story from Hermione's point of view, not saying you didn't do well at Draco's, but you do a superb job as Hermione. Can't wait to read the rest of the story :) Great job!!!

Author's Response: thank you :)

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Review #5, by rj_sunshine Watching You

23rd August 2010:
please update soon!!! i need to know more of the story 9/10 very enigmatic

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