AW! I love Ange. She is hilarious. This was so cute. Going down in my Favorites. I should do the same thing when I want to be married. Haha!Author's Response: Aha, I actually wrote a regular fiction piece about this, about a couple that doesn't really exist, and then I thought... this sounds like a George kind of thing. He belongs in the story just like Angie does. So, I made my original fiction into fan fiction. I'm truly addicted. :)
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That was such a great line to propose with!! I thought it was really funny how George was getting so confused. I really wanted to read this one because I just did a story with George and Angelina :)
Great job!!Author's Response: Awh, thanks! I love those two. They're so adorable. Report Review
That's so adorable! It's really sweet! :)Author's Response: Thank you very much. :) Report Review
This is really sweet :). I really like how you portrayed Angelina here, even when she wasn't really described very much in the books. George...is just George - gotta love him. :)Author's Response: Awh, thank you! :) I love George. Report Review
aw! it's so cute! I love George! great story =]Author's Response: I thought it was cute, too. Mucho fluffy. thank you so much! (: Report Review
This is so sweet. I literally awed. I love this ship and you write it beautifully. You actually capture the characters in these beautiful moments. It was beautiful. I love the way you write Angelina, I like her character. The fact that she was freaking out and being impatient. As I read this, i had no idea what George would say, but his reason really did make sense.
In all, real good one shot.
- SexyDoorFrames/Keely.Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! thank you so much! (: Report Review
Hi :) I really enjoyed this one shot. I found the plot line to be pretty true to life, but maybe that's because I have two friends who nearly ruined their respective proposals due to lack of communication and bad timing :P I love that George and Angelina were both waiting for the other person, and neither would take the first step. The characterizations were quite good, and I didn't notice any mistakes, so well done :)
I think my favorite part was:
“That piece of parchment is symbolic!”
“Of what, you officially losing your mind?”
Seemed like a very George response :PAuthor's Response: Aha, I wrote this as a not Harry Potter type thing, then I realized how nicely it'd fit in the HP world with the right pairing. I thought George and Angie would be the proper people to fill the shoes of Venus and Owen, my original characters. :) Report Review
Aw sweet:) I love itAuthor's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
I love this song! Train is my all-time favorite bands (:
And I have to say, I'm beginning to love this couple! So precious!
It was cute!
Hannah(:Author's Response: I love them too! They're so fun to write about. :) Report Review
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