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Review #1, by Darren Nomadd (Sorry) Chapter 3

7th September 2010:
Hey, I know I commented already but when I read your responce I noticed I made some mistakes; 1) Me and Sara are 18 and Lee is 22. I'm sorry for that typo! And yes guys can like chic stuff! we're not all heartless!

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Review #2, by Darren Nomadd Chapter 3

6th September 2010:
Sup dude? Sorry I didn't get to comment sooner, I just have a lot on my plate with the Mono and stuff. Lee, just started to get his hair back, but yeasterday her had a small stroke, the doctors' say that they didn't know if it related to the cancer in any way, so Sara, is staying at the hospital over night for a few days.

I think your story rocks! Even though I'm a ude and Sara tied me down to the bed (See bottom) to read it, I really like it!

Okay, the 1st time I read your stroy, Sara and Lee we're in our room reading your story, and Sara was explaining all the characters to him, at this time, he still had Cancer and lost almost lost all his hair, and she was like; "Darren, you have to read this. It's so good!" and I was like; "Reading is for nerds." So, she took rope from the closet, and tied me to the bed post and read it to me. . it's scary when she does that, but I like what do you chics' call it? fell in love with it?

Sara; 11, Nerd, Emo, my twin

Lee; boy, 12, sara's best friend, jock

Darren; 11, Hot, cool, hot

Author's Response: Dear Darren,
Thank You for writing. I hope both you and Lee will recover soon! It is very nice of Sara to stay with Lee in the hospital during this hard times.
Well, I'm really happy you enjoy the story (I'm surprised because I thought boys don't really like this kind of stuff).
My only problem is that you are 11 years old... And my stories contain adult theme, too... So, according to the hpff rules only those may read it who are over 17...
Anyway, thanx so much for the review, say hello to Lee and Sara, you all are very kind!
Get well real soon!
Hugs xxx


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Review #3, by MizzWeasley_o Chapter 3

3rd September 2010:
You mentioned Alice! WOOO! Haahaa! Sorry, but that's great because now it clears up the mystery of where the elfin vampire disappeared to. She's one of my favourites- heck, they all are.
I have to be honest with you, because of course I consider you to be a valuable pen-friend to say in the least; I'm having trouble stomaching the idea that Jasper and Hermione... that love story. Well, not stomaching it so much as trying to invision what you seem to have. It's not bad! Goodness no! The complete opposite, of course! But I may have to keep reading on. You know how I like to stick to the original plot lines as much as I can, so I just need to get used to stuff, that's all.
But concerning your wonderfully compelling chapter- wowee!
That was some writing there, dear friend! I have to say, at the end of the last chapter, I thought she was already dead! But she wasn't! And now I'm thoroughly intrigued as to her last words: 'Find...Rose...Danger'?? I am perplexed but insanely curious which is a marvellously good thing because that's what a mystery is supposed to do and you've written it so well.
Also, the little added thing like Hermione reading up on vampires- that is classic Hermione, so well done for your portrayal of the characters! Luna too- Professor Trelawney as Headmistress. Haha! I laughed out loud! But well written in there dear friend. Characterization is key in writing a superb story and you've done just that so well done!
Sorry about my little admission up there, but I felt it would be rude not to let you know one of my minor perceptions of your overall, wonderful story. It really is intriguing and I'm ridiculously curious as to who has done it, what the motive was- everything!
Really really well done, my friend and I look forward to reading your next chapter.
I hope you are keeping well?
Hugs ^^ x

MW XXX

Author's Response: My Dear MizzWeasley,
I'm writing this reply with a big smile on my face :) I love your long, detailed and very-very cute reviews! They always make my day.
Okay, let's start with Alice. I like her in Twilight, too, she has a nice personality and I like the Jasper/Alice pairing. But... I consider Jasper the handsomest character in Twilight (sorry to the Edward/Jacob/etc fans) and the movies left me unsatisfied: he appeared only a few times and not in romantic scenes. So I decided to write a kind of love story where he is one of the main characters. And, since my real world of writing is Harry Potter and Hogwarts, I decided to place him there... To be paired with the pretty Hermione. I find this situation more exciting than writing about how he met Alice. I know Jasmione is a strange ship but I'll try to do my best to please the readers... And, don't forget, Hermione is 25 now, Jasper is 20 (I mean, he looks 20), so Hermione is not a schoolgirl anymore.
Yeah, I know you like to stick to the original plot (and I don't mind that at all) but I'm not that strict...
You are right, Trelawney's last words will be important. And I'm so glad I could make you curious... You will have to read on if you want to know who murdered the professor and why.
Thank you so much for the very motivating words and also for sharing your minor perceptions with me, too. Don't worry, you don't hurt me if you criticize me a bit...
And, to answer your last question, yes, I'm fine :) I hope you had a nice summer, too and that you'll have a great autumn!
Hugs xxx


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Review #4, by EmpireAndAll Chapter 3

2nd September 2010:
Psh. Evil Malfoy and his douchyness.

Author's Response: He's not as bad as he looks :)
Thanx for reading and reviewing!
Hugs xxx


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Review #5, by EmpireAndAll Chapter 2

2nd September 2010:
The crazy woman must have fallen. She can barely see!

Author's Response: :) Accident or murder? Read on and you'll see...
Thanx for reading and reviewing!
Hugs xxx


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Review #6, by Sara Nomadd (Funny last name huh?) Chapter 3

2nd September 2010:
Hi! You might remember me from 'Sara and Lee', yeah? Well, it's just me reading this chapter this time because Lee is just getting over cancer and Darren has mono. I get to go to the hospital tomorrow to see Lee and he wants me to read this chapter to him. Darren, he's asleep so, he promised he'd comment when he wakes.

I want to say you really have this story going. Not many people can take romance/horror/action and it to all come together. I love how you write this. it just all flows together. I love this so very much!

Author's Response: Dear Sara, Lee and Darren,
yeah, of course I remember you :) I hope both Lee and Darren will get well soon and you can read hpff stories together :)
Thank you for the encouraging words, they always mean a lot to me! You are really kind. Your review warmed my heart :)
I hope you will like the coming chapters, too, I am writing chapter 4.
By the way, I have some other stories, too, if you like mystery/action/romance, I can recommend Yule Ball Night... You might like it (it's a bit twilightish at times...) The rest of my stories are mainly romantic and sensual.
Thanx again for the nice review!
Hugs xxx
PS: And if you send me a review again, please tell me about Lee and Darren, how they are!


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Review #7, by EmpireAndAll Chapter 1

2nd September 2010:
Nice chapter! Jasper was the ONLY person I liked in Twillight. He had the hardest time adjusting, being used by that one lady, so everyone else just got a storybook romance, and no inner termoil. PLEASE NO BELLA OR EDWARD! Anything but that!

Author's Response: Thanx for the kind words, I'm glad you liked the first chapter!
You are right about Jasper. And no need to worry, I'm not planning to put Edward or Bella in the story.
Hugs xxx


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Review #8, by Alex11215 Chapter 1

2nd September 2010:
Ok so I'm not gonna lie, I am not a Twilight fan. However I liked the first chapter and hope this story contains more Dramione than twilight. and as long as Edward and Bella don't show up, it will definitely be favorited.

Author's Response: Dear Alex11215,
No, Edward and Bella won't show up, don't worry :) I borrowed only Jasper from the Twilight saga.
My story is a kind of mixture: mixture of Dramione and Jasmione :) And if you want to know which guy Hermione will end up with, you will have to read on... ;)
So I hope you will like it.
Thanx for the review!
Hugs xxx


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Review #9, by Hermionniny9 Chapter 3

2nd September 2010:
this is where Draco Malfoy steps out and says "hes unnatural stay away"
hermione shrieks at him for sticking his nose in and then its goes down hill form there.
And so the plot thickens, i really like it. oh and what happened to alice, i really need to know, i love Alice she was my fave character from twilight (she is reasonably normal)

Author's Response: Dear Hermionniny9,
Your review made me smile :)
Yeah, I like Alice, too, but (unfortunately or not) she is not going to appear in my story.
I hope this fact does not disappoint you...
Hugs xxx


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Review #10, by MissThomas Chapter 3

2nd September 2010:
Great chapter ;D
10/10
xo

Author's Response: Dear MissThomas,
Thanx for the kind words and the great rating!
Hugs xxx


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Review #11, by hermione999 Chapter 1

30th August 2010:
Oooo Hermione likes Jasper!!! LOL sorry I havent reviewed any of ur stories lately or updated. The site keeps rejecting my chapter 8 and i am honestly tryin my best to hurry up. I have been trying to update it since july. Once again I'm sorry.
Great fic 10/10
Deja

Author's Response: Dear Deja,
great to hear from You again! :)
I hope you had a nice summer.
I'm glad you like my new story, I'm looking fwd to reading your new chapter!
Hugs xxx


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Review #12, by RAMMiE Chapter 2

30th August 2010:
Fabulous story!
i must admit Twilight isn't my favourite book but Jasper is my favourite character out of it and you have done a amazing job with the crossover.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
You've got me hooked:)
RAMMiE
x

Author's Response: Dear RAMMiE,
nice to hear from You again! Hope you're fine.
Yeah, I love Jasper, too... :) He's so good-looking, isn't he? :)
I'm glad you like the crossover, thanx for the motivating words!
Chapter 3 is awaiting validation.
Hugs xxx


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Review #13, by Jetney Chapter 2

29th August 2010:
amore della storia! Io vivo appena trasferita in Italia per cui non posso parlare molto inglese, ma questa storia mi piace molto. Voglio che l'aggiornamento per favore!

Author's Response: Cara/Caro Jetney,
sei molto gentile, grazie per la recensione fantastico! Sono felice questa storia ti piace molto :)
Ho fatto l'aggiornamento, spero che la storia sara convalidata presto!
Ciao! :)
PS: Ho imparato la lingua Italiano qualche anni fa ma purtroppo ho dimenticato molto :(


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Review #14, by dalarifat Chapter 2

27th August 2010:
This is the most amazing story I've ever read! I mean, the idea about Jasper went to Hogwarts it AMAZING! :)

Author's Response: Dear dalarifat,
Thanx so much for the enthusiastic review!:)
Chapter 3 is awaiting validation, hope you'll like it!
Hugs xxx


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Review #15, by Hermionniny9 Chapter 2

26th August 2010:
OMG, lol he may be 200 but he looks better than you. owned. its getting interesting.

Author's Response: I'm glad you still like it :)
I have posted the next chapter, awaiting validation.
Hugs xxx


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Review #16, by Hermionniny9 Chapter 1

26th August 2010:
i have a feeling that this will be a good cross over. normally its the trio go to america ect. but this could be good.

Author's Response: Dear Hermionniny9,
Thanx for reading and reviewing, hope you'll like the rest of the story, too :)
Hugs xxx


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Review #17, by MissThomas Chapter 2

26th August 2010:
Wow !!

It's getting exciting !

I LOVE the cliffhanger :)

I can't wait to read more !!
10/10
xo

Author's Response: Dear MissThomas,
I love your reviews, you are so sweet!:)
Thanx for the kind words!
I have posted the next chapter, hope you'll like it!
Hugs xxx


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Review #18, by Sara and Lee Chapter 2

24th August 2010:
Dude, when I say to gotta finish the next chapter fast, YOU GOTTA FINISH THE NEXT CHAPTER! OMG, we love is so much and this is one hell of a story I gotta say! BTW, we will from now on review every chapter! just remember "Sara and Lee" on some chapters we may read with my bro Darren, so you'll see him some times too!

Author's Response: Dear Sara, Lee and Darren,
thanx so much for the enthusiastic and motivating review!:) I will always look forward to reading your opinion!
I have posted Chapter 3, awaiting validation. I hope you will like the rest of the story, too :)
Hugs xxx


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Review #19, by vaCojonas Chapter 2

22nd August 2010:
jasper???and hermione???and draco?these are my favourite characters ever!omj this is awesome!please update soon!!!this is probably the best dramione ff i have read!!!:)

Author's Response: Wow! I hope I will be able to come up to your expectations! :)
Chapter 3 is in progress.
Thanx for the motivating review!
Hugs xxx


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Review #20, by MizzWeasley_o Chapter 2

20th August 2010:
Oh. My. God.
Well that plot line was a twist.
I must say, the whole thing with Jasper feeling like Hermione's blood is like a drug is very similar to the Edward/Bella situation. I know you've mentioned it, but what of Alice, hmm? It's your story- ignore me if you will, but she could be part of it. The jealous girlfriend obviously? A love rival for Hermione's, perhaps? But you can completely dismiss this comment. For me, I try to stick to the original plot lines of the stories and such, but you can just disregard my last few sentences if you want.
But that little cliffhanger! Wow, never expected it to be so sudden and so abrupt.
It was very well written in, just at the end there, like a little- oh, and this happened. It was a surprise but a good one :)
I do like the way you've written the tension between Jasper and Hermione. Very, very well done there my friend. And Draco's jealously was spot on, in my opinion.
I liked the way you've written Luna in, but- again, you can disregard if you wish- maybe she'd be slightly more dreamy, but you know, that's how I see her.
You know, I think I should shut up now and compliment your tension-thrilling chapter. It really was superbly portrayed in the context of Hermione's emotions. She is, as Bella before her, dazzled by that of a very attractive vampire. ;)
Well done, dear friend. Apologies for my rambling opinions. Your chapter is amazingly brilliant the way it is. :)
Well done. I hope you are keeping well?
Your friend,

MW XX

Author's Response: My Dear MizzWeasley,
It is so good to hear from You again!
Thank You so much for the quick review and the kind words, they always mean a lot to me!
You are absolutely right, the attraction between Jasper and Hermione is similar to that of Edward and Bella: a human and a handsome vampire... I haven't forgotten about Alice but I can tell you she won't appear in this story.
I'm glad you noticed Luna is not as dreamy as she usually is... It will turn out later, why.
And I'm so happy you liked the tension and the cliffie... The next chappie is in progress, hope you'll enjoy that, too.
Hope you have a nice summer, mine is busy but ok.
Hugs xxx


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Review #21, by Chrissy Chapter 2

20th August 2010:
update soon! its getting really good, keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Dear Chrissy,
Thanx for the motivating words!:) You are really kind.
Chapter 3 is in progress.
Hugs xxx


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Review #22, by Ravensdaughter Chapter 1

18th August 2010:
That's really good. I can't wait to read the rest.

Author's Response: Thanx for the positive feedback!
I have posted chapter 2, awaiting validation.
Hugs xxx


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Review #23, by Sara Chapter 1

15th August 2010:
I don't care if your busy, I don't care if your tired, and I don't care if you need to get a new organ. What you HAVE to do is:WRITE A NEW CHAPTER!

Author's Response: Dear Sara,
I have posted chapter 2, it is awaiting validation, hope you will like it :)
Thanx for your motivating words, you're cute!:)
Hugs xxx


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Review #24, by MissThomas Chapter 1

11th August 2010:
Oh my goodness.

Silvergreen i love you soo much !!!

Twilight and Harry Potter, the two things i love the most.
This is intresting
please please please update soon !
10/10
xo

Author's Response: My Dear MissThomas,
Great to hear from You again :)
I love you too :) Your reviews are always so kind, cheering me up :)
I have posted chapter 2, I hope you will like it.
Thanx for the sweet words!
Hugs xxx


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Review #25, by MizzWeasley_o Chapter 1

8th August 2010:
Dearest silvergreen,
I cannot thank you enough for doing a Twilight Crossover! I am in love with Twilight. I take it Jasper is perhaps your favourite. Mine is Emmett (played by the ever so delicious Kellan Lutz) with Edward (Mr. RPatz himself) coming in a close second. I've read all the books over and over again and love the films immensely. Of course, HP is my first love but still... Twilight's up there!
I'm so glad you've posted a new story, especially this one. I'm already intrigued- the title itself made me go ... oh! And then I read the summary and just HAD to read it of course. I commend you immensely on writing everyone's part in so well, especially Jaspers. I'd find it difficult to stray from the Twilight/Harry Potter storylines but you've managed it very very well. Well done.
I look forward to the second installment with baited breath. I cannot wait to see how this story unfolds. It should be an interesting one. I love a bit of mystery. :)
Congratulations on a superb first chapter- well introduced. I feel proud of you somehow! Haha! :)
I hope you are well and things are okay with you.
Hugs ^^
Your friend,

MW xxx

Author's Response: My Dear MizzWeasley,
sorry for the delay of my reply, I've been on holiday.
I hope you won't be disappointed and you will like the rest of the story, too :) I have just seen Eclipse and I think it had an effect on me and motivated me to write a crossover.
You're right, my fave is Jasper (I always seem to fall for blonds lol), followed by Edward, but Emmett is not bad, either :)
Mainly it is planned to be a romantic story (you know me) but spiced up with a bit of mystery. I've just posted the second chapter.
Thank You very much for the always motivating words, you are such a nice (pen)friend! :)
Hope you have a nice summer! As soon as I have time, I'll read on your story!
Hugs xxx


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