I had to laugh at her! Now when I read her in the books I'll think "You're scared of ants, you're scared of ants! Not so evil any more are you?!" I really hate Bellatrix so reading about her with a weakness really satisfied my hatred of her! Mwahahah...
Anyways! The story flowed really well and the separate parts ran together smoothly which made it nice to read and understand.
I think when she burst into tears at the dinner table was really realistic, because you could feel the tension building up between all the characters and Bellatrix before she felt the ant, and while you're tense little things always make you want to cry! Even for evil termites (wow I've got serious insects on the brain here!) of the Dark Lord.
Rodolphus being slightly harassment-like was funny! Lol I call it harassment because I don't like him, in any other case I would call it "cute" and probably use the phrase "Aw...".
Thank you for doing my challenge! I really enjoyed reading this! It fulfiled my curiousity about Bellatrix with a fear of ants would be like!
10/10Author's Response: Ahaha, yes, the great and powerful Bellatrix Black is afraid of small measley ants. MUAHAHA, I love being a writer so I can mess with cannon. Hehehe >:D
Thanks, I'm glad the story is easy to read for you.
Yeeah, when you're scared out of your wits and every little thing makes you cry your eyes out.
Rodolphus, what a guy. What kind of crazy person is looney over Bellatrix?! Well, then again, he loses her to Old Voldy. Ah, the weird aspects of 'love'. I can see you really hate the both of them, it's evident since you're just throwing punches at all of them. Hehe, its okay, I'm totally same-thinking as you.
Thanks for letting me be IN your challenge, dumbo me for not remembering that it had to be less than 1500 words. This was totally fun, phobias and evil witches spur imagination like no other! Thanks for the review! Report Review
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