Katebabelovesharrypotter: You really put yourself in Ginny's character for this story. Of course, your user name certainly gives that away. Very sweet story. Hope you write another story about when they reunite after the battle. You own Ginny's character. Well done. PWAuthor's Response: You totally made my day with this. I might have to write that just for you ;) Report Review
Hello, Kate! ^_^
It was very sweet of you to dedicate this lovely story to us, dear. Thank you! *hugs*
I liked the simplicity of how you related this story. Ginny was missing Harry, I get that, but some of the words you've chosen to tell that basic simple fact made this all extra special, you know? For example, this line: I padded quickly to the door, taking in the grey morning outside my blue walls. --> loved it! Very nifty. Haha. And I like your descriptions, very sweet and not at all over the top.
I wasn't sure about Ginny calling Harry 'baby' though. It sounded a little off, but that's probably just me. This story was very short and sweet, and I didn't notice any glaring technical errors as I was reading it, so good job! Overall, I enjoyed reading this - and that's not because it was dedicated to me or anything. Haha. Keep writing, my dear, and keep up the good work! See you around! ^_^Author's Response: Hey Tinny!
Thank you so much for the review and I'm so glad you liked it! I'm pretty sure she only called him baby because that was part of the line I had to use. I can't see me having her call him that either so I'm guessing that's what happened. Thanks agin, love! *hugs* Report Review
It think that was really sweet! But, I love like all stories about Harry and Ginny. Anyway, really good.Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) Report Review
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