Candy! Its me again.
Honestly, I chose thid to read next because the title was French. All right, you caught me. I was a little skeptical at first because I'm not exactly Lady Gaga's biggest fan.
I can't help but feel Ron's a little... I dunno.. mature in this fic. I mean, eventually he has to grow up sometime, and here he's. Talking so openly about his feelings and faults. It's just so odd to me.
The ending was a bit of a surprise; he asked her to marry him. They seemed to be having a tough time at the fics beginning but they come as far as that so quickly.
Anyway. I don't read many songfics, so this was a new and different experience for me (despite you only being given one line from the song to work with).
--AxjionAuthor's Response: Hm... I need to go back and rework this quite a bit. I'm not too happy with it, but I had a deadline... Thank you so much for another review! *hugs* I appreciate it so much! Report Review
I agree with beltgir in their review. I was kinda sudden, and I don't think he would've proposed if she said she didn't know if she loved. And if he did, then she wouldn't have agreed. But I still love it and I'll give you a 8/10.
~needapenname~Author's Response: thanks for the review. yeah i'll eventually go back and lengthen it. thanks for your feedback love Report Review
Aw!! It was so cute!! I love Ron and Hermione. It was so beautifully written! You did a wonderful job. I felt like I was in the story with them!! LOVED IT!
-GraceynAuthor's Response: thanks so much! Report Review
The ending felt abrupt. Kind of like you gave up and didn't feel like writing anymore, so you just slapped a sentence on the end and called it a day. Sorry if that was a bit harsh, but I think the ending could use a little more to it. Overall though, I like the idea, everything not perfectly working out for Ron and Hermione immediately. A good change from how most people write them getting together.
:)BaletGirAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for your input! I may go back and try to fix that abruptness. I appreciate the review :) Report Review
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