So clever. I must sat that I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
I just have one question. Is the title a reference to Florence + the Machine's song, "Rabbit Heart (Raise It Up)"? Because if it is, I love this story even more. She's my favorite artist of the moment. :)
Anyway, I do hope you update soon! Can't wait to see what happens.Author's Response: I'm glad that you're enjoying the story so far, and yes, the title is a reference to the Florence and the Machine song. :) I was going through a FATM phase and a rough patch when I was trying to name the story. The next chapter is in progress. Thank you for taking the time to read and review! Report Review
I was a tad confused in the beginning, but now I'm pretty sure I know what's going on. One thing I don't get is, why does Molly remember Lucy? I'd assume Percy would remember Lucy because he signed the contract-thingy... Then again, Declan remembers Lucy, so maybe it's the people who were close to Lucy that remember her?? Hmmm, well maybe that'll be answered in one of the later chapters?
I did notice that you changed to first person narrative in this paragraph-
"I didn't have much else to do in order to stall for time, as all of my things had already been packed for me and were probably already waiting in the car as usual, so I took a deep breath and headed out of my room to face probably the most unpleasant people in the universe - the Parkinsons."
Other than that, I found this chapter very intriguing and I can't wait to see what happens next! :)Author's Response: Oh wow, I didn't notice that I switched D: I'll be sure to change that as soon as possible! Thanks for pointing that out! And yes, it's safe to say that it is only the people that were really close to Lucy who remember her. Thanks for taking the time to read and review :) Report Review
This was really interesting; I want to read more. I will most definitely be keeping an eye out for the next chapter. *Adds to favorites.*Author's Response: That's wonderful to hear! Thank you for taking the time to read and review, and hopefully I will have another chapter ready once the queue has reopened :) Report Review
I like this very much so far. :) It was definitely more than "decent," haha! I love the way that you write, and I'm really looking forward to reading more of this in the future. :)Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you thought so :) The next chapter is in progress, but hopefully it will be finished by the time the queue opens up again. Thanks again for taking the time to read and review! Report Review
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